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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone03/10/13

5ed

nice turn
And there is my dilemma
actually I generally don't like poems about poetry
but this has a nice contrast
I stand in fields of wasting straggled corn...
Compost dead and dying, then add some manure
and this
Gleaned from pastures trod in your wanderings
priceless
edit more for punch

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by weepingangel8803/11/13

within the words...

I find a piece of myself! Wonderfully written! Again, thank you for sharing!

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