All Comments on 'Outranked'

This is such a wonderful piece, and T was so disappointed to find out it's your only story so far. I hope you find time to write more and share the fruits of your talent with us all :) Thank you for this!

Nice story... Thank you!

Not the usual kinda of story i like, but it really got me turned on with the descriptions. Hope the story continues soon.

It wasn't a bad story, but the spelling and grammar mistakes pulled me out of the story and it took me awhile to get off.

If you knew anything about the Military, rank and male ego you'd know that this sad little tale is so totally worthless as to be laughable.

This story has lots of potential...subordinate taking charge! I enjoyed it!