All Comments on 'Undershirt'

Five.

possible heads up, if I find the material, I will highlight some of the neat things you have done, in a vain effort to get readers to think about possibilities in writing. It's a nice warm feeling I get from pissing in the wind and having it land on my feet,

nice

...both for what it says, and for what it lets me say. You've built in spaces for readers to see themselves. Lovely! Thank you!