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If my true love were a tree

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by twelveoone03/10/13

well

that was different, from Hallmark to Hell boy
And the chance to carry his spawn
you got the timing down

and
Wood from him would make a fine table
really, you do have to see where you are going with this
5ed

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by Anonymous03/11/13

well now we know what some folks consider

good poetry, just keep the dogs away from the tree

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by weepingangel8803/22/13

I don't know

... How wet my blouse would be but my panties would be drenched....

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