You are one fine writer. Each line gets better, deeper and hotter. You make things exciting even if I'm into certain things; you make a person curious. That is good writing!
Your description of her taking control but at the same time loving him is wonderful!
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You are one fine writer. Each line gets better, deeper and hotter. You make things exciting even if I'm into certain things; you make a person curious. That is good writing!
Great story!
Your description of her taking control but at the same time loving him is wonderful!
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