Spilled Milk

5ed

you got good stuff
blue bed of fluff and fuck and failure
to stop crying over spilled milk and seventeen pints of blood and placenta. Just clean it up.
I'm afraid the arrangement buries some of it
Just clean it up.
and wonder of this would be better
blue bed of fluff, fuck and failure
dam-an, wish I would have wrote

Nice Susan, the lines went running through my head...

...in freeze frame images. Liked the other too.

Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback, folks. Much appreciated.

well done-5

unconventional, needs work but still over the top real life pathos

this one really strikes a deep chord with me. thank you for sharing.