...this story would have been better with a little prior background, like long held, but suppressed longing one for the other.
As it is, the thought of unpremeditated sudden loss of control is kind of exciting.
A short, sharp, sweet, unplanned fuck is always good, and even better between siblings.
My dad passed away when I was 25, and during one of her more vulnerable moments when she had too much to drink, my mom sucked me off after she caught me jerking off. We fucked a lot after that until I got married, and it was always mind blowing, but I've always regretted not having a sister.
Well done, and thanks.
with both previous comments... screams for a sequel and at least some flashback memories of teasing that had planted the seed of desire in their minds... I'm guessing they didn't get a lot of sleep that night... ;)
Very good image of two horny young people getting drawn into expressing feelings they had kept hidden within themselves until a situation called for release.
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Anonymous03/14/13
Crap
Only half a story
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Anonymous03/16/13
Where is the imagination and creativity?
Same story written by hundreds of authors. This time, another author telling the story. Where is the imagination and creativity?
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Anonymous03/17/13
Amzing
I am always turned on by brother-sister, and this story of an accident happening has made me cum multiple times and I read this story when I need a fast orgasm, and this always delivers!
Please fill in the gaps, this is a great story, but there's insufficient back-story to lead into what happens, so please, flesh it out, give us a prequel! I still liked it though, hurry up part 2!
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Anonymous04/18/13
awesome
Awesome writing, your humor on this story is great. The purposeful hesitation fits the story well also.
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Anonymous04/21/13
Sweet!
I actually like how there isn't much of a back story... A lot of stories on here have too much crap at the beginning but you kept it short and sweet!
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...this story would have been better with a little prior background, like long held, but suppressed longing one for the other.
As it is, the thought of unpremeditated sudden loss of control is kind of exciting.
A short, sharp, sweet, unplanned fuck is always good, and even better between siblings.
My dad passed away when I was 25, and during one of her more vulnerable moments when she had too much to drink, my mom sucked me off after she caught me jerking off. We fucked a lot after that until I got married, and it was always mind blowing, but I've always regretted not having a sister.
Well done, and thanks.
And then????
Come on - time for the rest of the story!
Great beginning, leaves us wanting more. More please!
I agree...
with both previous comments... screams for a sequel and at least some flashback memories of teasing that had planted the seed of desire in their minds... I'm guessing they didn't get a lot of sleep that night... ;)
Nice
Very good image of two horny young people getting drawn into expressing feelings they had kept hidden within themselves until a situation called for release.
Crap
Only half a story
Where is the imagination and creativity?
Same story written by hundreds of authors. This time, another author telling the story. Where is the imagination and creativity?
Amzing
I am always turned on by brother-sister, and this story of an accident happening has made me cum multiple times and I read this story when I need a fast orgasm, and this always delivers!
Screams for a back-story...
Please fill in the gaps, this is a great story, but there's insufficient back-story to lead into what happens, so please, flesh it out, give us a prequel! I still liked it though, hurry up part 2!
awesome
Awesome writing, your humor on this story is great. The purposeful hesitation fits the story well also.
Sweet!
I actually like how there isn't much of a back story... A lot of stories on here have too much crap at the beginning but you kept it short and sweet!
very nice
I really like this story. Its extremely hot...
Nice introduction
How soon will the story be posted?
Lovely
I loved this story, and your other one, too. I hate the pages and pages of build up! Short, sweet, hot as fuck! Keep writing, please!
great story
I really liked it, 5 stars. Please continue the story and your great writing.
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