You Can't Do That! Ch. 02

Covered them all yet?

So fer we've had a BTB(itch): "Bang, Bang, Out Went the Lights."
We've had a reconcitiation/BTB(astard): "Enforcing The Pre-Nup."
A straight reconciliation: "Terrible Taste In Tees."
And now a semi-reconciliation. WHEW! You've seemed to have used up the Loving Wives category. Not to mention just about every other category except Incest/Taboo!
You should be getting plenty of practice toward that Great Amenican Novel! (grin)

Worn down by a stalker

It was not a reconciliation - he was worn down by a stalker and betrayed by his granddaughter.

I enjoyed the story until the non-end. I could have even accepted a reconciliation if that was what he explicitly wanted.

Y C D T===Q

A=== Wanna Bet. TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm Sorry, But...

I tend to like happy endings, and I'm not BTB unless I feel it is earned.

But Sheila has TWICE walked out on him, the second time after treating him with much disrespect.

If HE wants a FWB relationship, that's his choice, but only if she respects his boundaries, which it doesn't seem like she is doing.

I know she SAYS she's not marriage material, but she is definitely looking for as much of a committed relationship as she can get, and certainly wouldn't say no to a re-marriage.

Neither one

Don't burn the bitch, but sure as hell don't get involved with her again.First time shame on you, second time shame on me. There should never be a third time.

Further Thoughts

Not only did she walk out on him twice, but during therapy he mentioned some other "rough patches", with the implication that she had cheated at least a couple of times, but it was never revealed if that was fact or not.

In any case, I repeat my earlier remarks, that he should make sure she respects boundaries, and a good start would be her NOT doing naked yoga on his patio after he has another woman.

really!!!!

She screws around 2 times maybe more, she gets the house and 800 grand!!! You should of just been happy being a cuckhold, it woild of saved you alot of money and.time

OR HOW ABOUT

Y N S T D T......u r not supposed to do that. TK U MLJ LV NV

Who carres about BTB?

How about being worried about terminal stupidity? The way you have written their characters it simply made no sense to have him do anything but not see her again after she came to his birthday party. He certainly wouldn't have stayed overnight. She has been a total bitch and just because some time goes by he's going to forget that and sleep with her? That action was both irrational and implausible. And it ruined a good story. Sorry Mr Q but while this was well written and enjoyable the ending just didn't make sense. UGH!

Where did that great writer go?

Not nearly the same quality of writing in this chapter as was apparent in the first. Grammar took a big hit. Flow was interrupted frequently. Hard to read and follow the story line. Timeline was confusing. YCDT was a nice surprise (I should have seen it coming).

This chapter could of been skipped.

Reads like Matt M, king of the wimps, wrote this. Definitely a single star.

Re-Reading

"Then you'll be divorcing an unemployed house wife instead of a well paid professional. It'll cost you more than the satisfaction you'll get, paying her alimony. Let's hope she doesn't figure it out and quit for spite."

I am the furthest thing from a divorce expert, but even knowing how unfair divorce laws are towards men, I can't believe that if she deliberately quits that alimony would be based on what she SHOULD be earning if she didn't quit.

Re-Reading, Part Two

I'm sorry, I know it's his life, but it seems like Sheila has been rewarded for her bad behavior.

She's got a good chunk of his wealth, which Kelsie deserves more than her, and a strong FWB relationship when she should be kept at arm's length.

I know that given his lust, and yes, affection, for her it would to a certain degree be cutting off his nose to spite his face, but he should DEFINITELY take sex off the table, and tell her to stay on her own side of the cove unless invited.

Ultimate Revenge

Having your ex watch you with other lovers while trying to get you back - unsuccessfully?

Another thoroughly enjoyable story

by an incurable romantic who is also one of the best writers on this or any other site. Thanks for another great trip!

To quote an Oscar-winning Rabbit,

"What a MAROON"! Does Sheila have to give Roy an STD for him to wake up? By the way, does BTB mean being a total JACKASS for ONE particular piece of ass (Remember, YOU wrote that Roy will never re-marry Sheila, so it must just be a sex thing)? I'd like to think a sixty-two year old man would be smarter than that. Guess the old saw about an old fool is dead on where your Hero is concerned.

A total waste

I invested a lot of time in this tale only to find at the bottom of page 2 that it is another raving cuck story. Very disappointing to say the least. I probably won't waste anymore time on this author.

It's a shame really.

loved it

isn't it funny how you do, and feel about things once money is not a factor?

Poor Sudden Thunder

Great stuff qhml1. Keep up the great writing.

Big fan

Good Writing, But...

I'm not liking where this seems to be going.

For all her talk about knowing she isn't "marriage material", Sheila seems determined to get her hooks back into him, and the sub-title for Ch 3, "Sheila", seems kind of ominous!

Divorce

Somewhat repeating what KarenE said, but this is at least the second story I’ve read where either the idea or the fact of the wife quitting her job to increase alimony was mentioned, and despite how much the divorce laws seem to favor the women, I STILL don’t think most judges would look askance at such tactics, just as I’m sure they would if the HUSBAND conveniently reduced HIS income to try to reduce his alimony payments.

Heart wants what the heart wants.

I cannot believe even after my second read that he went to bed with her. Hocking up with her can be seen as one of two things, a very subtle revenge in that he strings her along, not willing to commit but willing to screw, or he still loves the silly cunt and wants her back even though the big head is saying stay away. My beliefs is that it is a mix of both. As we find out in the third part, his granddaughter after promising not to let her know where he is shows it to her. That is a betrayal. Even if she is doing it with the best of intentions since she wants her pseudo parents/grandparents back together, she should have stayed out of it. The wife never denied cheating on him. He should have asked if his child was really his. He should have put his foot down when she started with the you can't do that bull shit. When she asked for a bigger porch he should have just said, nope sorry, can't do that. Anyway, this is fiction and the story is fairly well done. He should have put in a clause that she not be able to move within five miles of him. But that would be unenforceable at the best of times. However, regardless of what is said, he makes sure she knows when he is getting something more from other women. That has to eat her alive. Oh well.

Thanks

Another excellent read. I have a few true stories in my head and you inspire me try to write. There is a lot of porn rubbish on Lit, also some remarkable storytellers and you are one of the best.

PERSONS THAT GO AROUND IN CIRCLES

don't have to worry about finding themselves. TK U MLJ LV NV

sorry you killed the story with the ending

Lets see, I married my second wife when I was 56 years old and she was 21 years younger, she passed after almost 20 years together. No reason to ever go back to old trash.

The Real Problem

The real problem is not the cheating, it is her personality disorder and the miserable relationship they had. As you get older in life, after the kids are grown, the last thing you need in your life is unnecessary aggravation. When you are young, when you are in the mating and then the child rearing phase you may have to eat some crap from a fucked up spouse in order to have kids and get them through to adulthood. After that, there is no reason to suffer the stupidity of arrogant fools. After that, you will have lived long enough to gain enough wisdom that you should not be so desperate that you have to accept a cheater or an abuser or any other kind of fuck up in your life. So, yes you ending does suck. Not because he didn't serve her well done, but because he continued to waste his time interacting with her. She is a loser pure and simple. Time with her would only diminish him, not invigorate or improve him - it would not be time wisely spent.

Nooo...

Not the serial cheating bitch. He's let her repeatedly cheat on him in the past and taken her back each time. Don't be stupid! No one is worth that amount of trouble. If he takes her back again all she'll know is that if she does it again he'll take her back again and again. He needs to find someone who really respects him and won't use him as a meal ticket and a warm cock between other warm cocks.

Second time through...

Still five stars. Still love it. While I don't care for the ending, especially given she did the same exact thing to him twice, it is very well done.

fool

She's been a cheater her entire life and you , essentially took her back. Nothing like an old fool. Everyone is different I guess, but I'd have never gotten back together with her after her little adventure with the married doctor. Once a cheater, always a cheater. They just love the thrill of new. I did give you a four, because it was well written, but just couldn't relate to his decisions.

Good story - bad ending

You're right. He should have been more observant and never let Kelsie invite Sheila in the first place. And once she got there, never agree to take her back to her place. You can't do that? More like a smart man doesn't go there. She's broken. She never was apologetic about her actions. She moves up there so she won't be alone. Being involved with her makes no sense. Bad ending.

Second time through

I read all three chapters first and was feeling like Roy was somehow mentally deficient when he let her screw over him a second time after many years of marriage. Then I went back and re-read the first two chapters and came away with a different opinion of Roy as a man that realized that his wife had a mental problem and while dealing with the divorce he was more generous than he had to be but, he did what made him feel better and still got his independence while he was still young enough to enjoy life. He even had a very thankful granddaughter for his actions and an ex-wife that would comfort him without any future commitments from him. She did acknowledge that she wasn't marriage material knowing her own flaws and admitting them to him. I find that this story was complete here and while chapter three filled in a few details, it wasn't necessary. Very good writing - thanks and you get my five starts.

Pretty good.

But a whore just isn't attractive.

Left a bad aftertaste.

Confused

Well I am confused. She kept demanding more from the divorce and he kept giving it. Then at the end they are friends with benefits. Sorry but that ruined it for me. Some experience as in parts of your story and not reality for me. 4/5.

I am done

I can't put myself through anymore of your stories. She is a serial cheater, he knows she is a serial cheater, and somehow the happy ending is that they get back together.

I am done

this is as far as i will read this story this ending is very disapointing she cheated twice we know of and is strongly sugested she cheated a lot more in therapie so him forgiving her is just out of the qeustion

also there is major plot flaw when we first we begin reading this story his a forklift driver we got promoted to manager but he whent to collage so that is also just rediculous

good

Nice Sunday evening read. Liked it.

Fekin 1*

You portrayed the Husband pain ol' STUPID in the end.
Cheating on him twice and you get them together again completely ruined he story.
As anonymous in onw of the comments said I am done with your stories.
I liked your Romance category stories but your Loving wives stories suck.It makes me Sick & want to Puke.
Pathetic!!!!! 1frekin * for this garbage.

Done

Ive liked your other stories but this was dumb. Shes a cheating slut that had what I would guess is self-esteem issues. 1 star.

A Few Thoughts.....

Anonymous must have a lower than normal IQ!.......First of all this is fiction and it can be anything the writer wants it to be. Second when writing and scoring a writer it is not so much about the content of the story but the quality of the writing. Does the writing of qhml1 make you angry?...sometimes sad?...sometimes happy?...or shocked?...do you ever cry when reading his stories? Q brings every one of these emotions out in me and I like the quality and style of the writing. Do I like the content of every story...NO! But the ability to write these stories and the emotion they bring out has been worthy of a "5" every time. Thank you Q....keep writing please.

Stinker

She disrespected him through the whole relationship. Someone with an ounce of self respect would have done after the first incident. You obviously wanted to branch out with this one and chuckle at the comments. You are still one of my very favorite authors but I can't stand this one, I REALLY despise it. Good writers can bring that out in readers for better or worse.

This Chapter Is A Turn Off

Do you realize how stupid you are making the husband appear? Over the course of their relationship/marriage/separation/divorce, Sheila has probably had over 1,000 sexual encounters with almost 400 men.

SOME COMMENTEE ARE BOWL LICKERS

Story is Fantastic! WHY BECAUSE I SAY SO! To the fucken drongos dueling in a pissing contest? Girls you both are not Miss Universe! Maybe Miss Dog (diesel dogs daughter)So be a dog and PISS OFF ! See ya!

gotta agree with Harry

The fact that the wife did the EXACT same thing before when they were dating and thinking about getting marred and then again after 25-30 years of marriage makes any reconciliation irrational and absurd.