I read the first chapter solely out of curiosity, and thought it was alright. The series has an awkwardness that reflects the situation well. I think just about any of us would be thoroughly confused by something like this. But however realistic, it makes for a slighty whiny and annoying story.
ehh, hmm
I read the first chapter solely out of curiosity, and thought it was alright. The series has an awkwardness that reflects the situation well. I think just about any of us would be thoroughly confused by something like this. But however realistic, it makes for a slighty whiny and annoying story.
More!!!
Please write another chapter or two!!!
OMG!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE !!! WRITE MORE !!
Plz hurry & update!
Plz update this!! I read this a long time ago and it's still not updated.... Really?
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