I see Anonymous (the only one or at least the first one posted to the comment section) can't post his name...and leaves you a bad story comment. He/She is just one of these that likes to cut peoples stories down but they are on here every day reading them and have nothing else to do. Anyway, thought your story was good and well written. Keep up the writing and good luck.
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Anonymous03/15/13
Yes, electroshock therapy......
The perfect cure for E.D. Alert the medical journals!!!!! Despite this display of sarcasm, I DID actually like the story. I'm going to check out your stuff, and read others, so mission accomplished.
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Anonymous03/15/13
Should be IAMHopeless as as author.
Because that describes the author's skills. And O2Speedy can take an aeronautical seduction of a rotating piece of perforated pastry.
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Anonymous03/15/13
if she really loved him
she wouldn't have done it, regardless of how much she wanted to
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Anonymous03/15/13
ii pimp my wife out to feel better is a good title
of course if she really loved her husband she would not have had the sex
How fucking convenient. Just hours after breaking her, vows set up by him, he is magically cured by what should have been a lethal exposure to electricity. Really? Really??? I'm sorry but with the pains you set the story up with to have him set up a gang bang she was saved from in order to start their relationship doesn't make sense. It is far beyond ironic. I can't imagine him doing it and I can't believe it were possible she would forgive him setting her up like that. What a complete moron he would have to be to assume that even in extreme horniness the irony would be acceptable to her. If you are making the assumption that he must love her completely to set that up then I cannot think you gave her any credit for the love she is suppose to have for him. Did you stop to think what this would have done to her? Or was it the fact that illicit sex was the point of your story? Since the description of the GB was fairly weak and short I would haven to assume the sexual part was not primary or you failed miserably. I just don't think you truly portrayed the characters as you set them up. Blast me for being a whiner but when I'm disappointed I want to let the writer know. I'm sure there will be people more tolerant than me and some who are less.
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Anonymous03/16/13
Enjoyed It
I enjoyed this story of a loving, married couple trying to please each other despite the 'bumps in the road'. Life gives you 'bumps in the road' which my wife and I have had to pass through...love is hard work but it is what matters. Good story.
I knew a very attractive woman who had a standing get out of jail card like Vicky because her husband was paralyzed from a ski accident. I think " it " was there for me, but a third guy I absolutely despised had been with her before me. So, nope.
He did manipulate her and she was technically abused or even raped - BUT - worked out for all involved and this is a story not RL so let it go and enjoy -
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Anonymous07/31/13
It's just story
Wow...everybody needs to lighten up...it's just a story...that you didn't have to pay to read. Yeah, maybe it's a little unrealistic but, it sure was entertaining. I really enjoyed it. Two equal partners in love helping each other out...what could be more romantic? He was man enough to get the woman he loved..serviced, so to speak...And you know, he would have killed those three if they had violated the rules. So, he was whimp chuck. 5x5
what would you do for the love of your life, not only that, but she couldn't keep it to herself, suspect guilt feelings, but then understood, I f**ken loved it, when she realized it. good girls are hard to find, maybe as hard as good guys, what do I know.
As an old electric utility guy I feel obliged to caution that when a high voltage line is on the ground, the ground is energized for maybe 50 feet around. He would have probably been killed when he approached the wire. The branch he picked up would also have been conductive.
However, it was a very readable story. I got struck by lightening 7 years ago, and afterwards my eyesight improved rapidly and I no longer need glasses. Strange maybe and can't explain it (or even confirm there wasn't another reason) but does suggest that the event in the story could just be possible!
My father worked on top secret electronic surveillance equipment when he was in the military. Once while working on some kind of jamming device he stretched his arm over the capacitor. He didn't actually come in full contact with it. He was lifted off of the tall barstool and thrown backwards against a wall some nine feet behind him. He slid to the floor where he lay unconscious for a solid five minutes. And that was 'only' 700 volts.
It is easy to pick holes in a story, would the average man try and arrange such a thing?, I doubt it but anything is possible it depends on the individuals concerned. Some years back my wife had a long term physical condition preventing intercourse, knowing my liking for plenty of rumpy-pumpy she offered that I could obtain it elsewhere with certain conditions of course. Her view is that sex is about love but also it's recreational fun, she felt that our love was strong enough to simply see me going with another as just recreation. I was a little taken aback at her statement, thought about it and decided against her offer. The result of this is her already good oral skills improved to a point where I jokingly said she could turn professional, that resulted in a hard but playful slap. Eventually things returned to normal with her extra skills. I think anything is possible in this life and many readers of this site have, surprisingly, closed minds. A very good yarn with a happy ending and all is well in the world.
English
interesting
This was a good story. She didn't want to cheat but hubby helped her out. Good story keep writing.
Good Story
I see Anonymous (the only one or at least the first one posted to the comment section) can't post his name...and leaves you a bad story comment. He/She is just one of these that likes to cut peoples stories down but they are on here every day reading them and have nothing else to do. Anyway, thought your story was good and well written. Keep up the writing and good luck.
Yes, electroshock therapy......
The perfect cure for E.D. Alert the medical journals!!!!! Despite this display of sarcasm, I DID actually like the story. I'm going to check out your stuff, and read others, so mission accomplished.
Should be IAMHopeless as as author.
Because that describes the author's skills. And O2Speedy can take an aeronautical seduction of a rotating piece of perforated pastry.
if she really loved him
she wouldn't have done it, regardless of how much she wanted to
ii pimp my wife out to feel better is a good title
of course if she really loved her husband she would not have had the sex
Good lord
How fucking convenient. Just hours after breaking her, vows set up by him, he is magically cured by what should have been a lethal exposure to electricity. Really? Really??? I'm sorry but with the pains you set the story up with to have him set up a gang bang she was saved from in order to start their relationship doesn't make sense. It is far beyond ironic. I can't imagine him doing it and I can't believe it were possible she would forgive him setting her up like that. What a complete moron he would have to be to assume that even in extreme horniness the irony would be acceptable to her. If you are making the assumption that he must love her completely to set that up then I cannot think you gave her any credit for the love she is suppose to have for him. Did you stop to think what this would have done to her? Or was it the fact that illicit sex was the point of your story? Since the description of the GB was fairly weak and short I would haven to assume the sexual part was not primary or you failed miserably. I just don't think you truly portrayed the characters as you set them up. Blast me for being a whiner but when I'm disappointed I want to let the writer know. I'm sure there will be people more tolerant than me and some who are less.
Enjoyed It
I enjoyed this story of a loving, married couple trying to please each other despite the 'bumps in the road'. Life gives you 'bumps in the road' which my wife and I have had to pass through...love is hard work but it is what matters. Good story.
Moderately contrived & moderately hot !
I knew a very attractive woman who had a standing get out of jail card like Vicky because her husband was paralyzed from a ski accident. I think " it " was there for me, but a third guy I absolutely despised had been with her before me. So, nope.
PLEASE !!!
In Sickness and Health Need say More !!!
Nice story
about a caring relationship of equal partners.
A nice change to get a balanced tale
Good ending to a loving story
He did manipulate her and she was technically abused or even raped - BUT - worked out for all involved and this is a story not RL so let it go and enjoy -
It's just story
Wow...everybody needs to lighten up...it's just a story...that you didn't have to pay to read. Yeah, maybe it's a little unrealistic but, it sure was entertaining. I really enjoyed it. Two equal partners in love helping each other out...what could be more romantic? He was man enough to get the woman he loved..serviced, so to speak...And you know, he would have killed those three if they had violated the rules. So, he was whimp chuck. 5x5
Uhhh!!!!
Why this stupid end of story? Apart for the final paragraph the story was tremendous.
It had been better if Vince had died.
liked it a lot
what would you do for the love of your life, not only that, but she couldn't keep it to herself, suspect guilt feelings, but then understood, I f**ken loved it, when she realized it. good girls are hard to find, maybe as hard as good guys, what do I know.
High voltage
As an old electric utility guy I feel obliged to caution that when a high voltage line is on the ground, the ground is energized for maybe 50 feet around. He would have probably been killed when he approached the wire. The branch he picked up would also have been conductive.
I think he would have died
However, it was a very readable story. I got struck by lightening 7 years ago, and afterwards my eyesight improved rapidly and I no longer need glasses. Strange maybe and can't explain it (or even confirm there wasn't another reason) but does suggest that the event in the story could just be possible!
Electricity Is Deadly
My father worked on top secret electronic surveillance equipment when he was in the military. Once while working on some kind of jamming device he stretched his arm over the capacitor. He didn't actually come in full contact with it. He was lifted off of the tall barstool and thrown backwards against a wall some nine feet behind him. He slid to the floor where he lay unconscious for a solid five minutes. And that was 'only' 700 volts.
Holes
It is easy to pick holes in a story, would the average man try and arrange such a thing?, I doubt it but anything is possible it depends on the individuals concerned. Some years back my wife had a long term physical condition preventing intercourse, knowing my liking for plenty of rumpy-pumpy she offered that I could obtain it elsewhere with certain conditions of course. Her view is that sex is about love but also it's recreational fun, she felt that our love was strong enough to simply see me going with another as just recreation. I was a little taken aback at her statement, thought about it and decided against her offer. The result of this is her already good oral skills improved to a point where I jokingly said she could turn professional, that resulted in a hard but playful slap. Eventually things returned to normal with her extra skills. I think anything is possible in this life and many readers of this site have, surprisingly, closed minds. A very good yarn with a happy ending and all is well in the world.
Anonymity
Yes,we are ALL anonymous.
But when you use an ID it is easier to carry on a conversation.
It's a lot easier to reply to JohnDoe1234 than Anonymous 04/01/2016, especially if there are 5 Anons on 04/01/2016!
Nice Wrinkle
A love story for sure, and a sweet little wrinkle at the end!
Thanks for a good story!
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