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by HarryHill03/12/13

Nice feverman

Not huge, this wound my heart endures this hour
Not like the gaping hole a blade might leave
Nor even close to wounds from rude gunfire
Yet hurt, I truly am, and I do grieve.

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by chooseme03/12/13

Just words! Yeah right but the ability to steal one's heart... and that is just what you do!

What a brilliant piece... so romantic.. so heartfelt. I am in awe of your creativity and your imagination.
How eloquently expressed... the warmth you have felt for your online friend, the mutual affection and now your spirit has ceased to be fed and you are left to wonder....
To ponder what could have been, what should have been, what might have endured.
Well there are plenty more of us here waiting!

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