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by Anonymous03/12/13

*****

Five.

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by erectus12303/12/13

nicely done

love found at last?, a few extra words here and there might be cut, also "tis" is a little too Elizabethan is contrast to rest of language, but a very nice effort, message requires cyphering -5

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by HarryHill03/12/13

5ed... liked the layout, semi whispy

some good lines
liked this 'Will the whipping wipe the wonder from the world' and this 'and fantasies that come to me'

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