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Suspense is killing me, but the thought of more has me wondering, what could happen next?
While I love the suspense of what is happening both at William's house and across the street at Susan's, this story really puts my imagination to work. Will William see what he desires, what is Liz doing in the upstairs room and why do I think it's watching William? Reading this erotic entry is like doing a jigsaw puzzle, one looks and looks and finally a few of the pieces start to fit into place. William almost seems to obvious by spending so much time alone and I would have used a telescope rather than binoculars for that long a period. All three characters spend an awful lot of time upstairs, but I'm sure our talented author will piece it all together soon. Another great entertaining 5 star piece of writing, this tale almost has me thinking it's written about myself, as William and I have similar age infirmity issues, not all physical, some mental as we weave our way through the start of the senior years and questioning what life has left in store for us. Again, great writing from one of, if not the best Literotica author. It's amazing how a story with little or no sexual activity can be so captivating ! You make me smile Susan Jill Parker :)
On and On
Love the way this story is feeding my very best fantasies.
But I'm getting frustrated.
Need some real hot sex scenes for the story to catch up to my fantasy and end the suspense.
I love a good story,
and this is proving to be a great one.
Where is this going?
Is William slowly losing his mind? Does Susan know he is watching? Is Liz really oblivious to what William does in his office? How does this tie into chapter 1 of this story? Keep up the great story Susan.
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