All Comments on 'The Ride Home'

by bigwoody8

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
By all means continue.

It sounds like the real party is just getting started and you know how important it is for the birthday girl to get some.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Total Rubbish

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
add the birthday girl

bring the birthday girl into it ... im sure that would go great

Kat0511Kat0511about 11 years ago
A good start

It's a good first submission. Keep working at it. With any luck, the Guadalupe levels will be decent enough this year.

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