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by Anonymous03/17/13

Great story

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by Anonymous03/17/13

By all means continue.

It sounds like the real party is just getting started and you know how important it is for the birthday girl to get some.

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by Anonymous03/17/13

Total Rubbish

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

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by Anonymous03/18/13

add the birthday girl

bring the birthday girl into it ... im sure that would go great

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by Kat051103/18/13

A good start

It's a good first submission. Keep working at it. With any luck, the Guadalupe levels will be decent enough this year.

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