Halloween Short

Good twist at the end.

Great way to hunt demons. I gave you 5***** for that one!

That was fun!

Hmm, how was it that he was able to have the same type of snakes that she used as a ribbon? The story said that the castle he used as a home was frightening him at the night hours, something that is highly unlikely if he is a wizard or some such item. I like the fact that the demon got what she deserved but a bit more explanation would be good.

It was ok

The story was OK but there were several issues. Along with the other comments I don't understand many aspects of the story, plus the twist was given with foreseeing or any hint throughout the story, who or what he was. good short story, would love to read a longer version with more info.