That was crazy good! I loved Mr. Air Force in stealth mode gettin' to the woman he'd been drooling over. He sounds ridiculously gorgeous!
I wouldn't mind having a fine one like that around (handy, gorgeous and loves to eat...well)! The only thing that I felt detracted from this story was that it felt rushed. I get it that one minute homegirl is just standing there washing some dishes, and the next she's getting some good good, but his overtly sexual gesture seems a bit much especially since it was mostly minor flirtation, and just being kind to one another.
Maybe it is just me, but that is the only thing that felt off in this otherwise great story.
English
*****
Five.
Great Job
Another great story from you, I really love this one. Nice job :-)
Hot damn!
That was crazy good! I loved Mr. Air Force in stealth mode gettin' to the woman he'd been drooling over. He sounds ridiculously gorgeous!
I wouldn't mind having a fine one like that around (handy, gorgeous and loves to eat...well)! The only thing that I felt detracted from this story was that it felt rushed. I get it that one minute homegirl is just standing there washing some dishes, and the next she's getting some good good, but his overtly sexual gesture seems a bit much especially since it was mostly minor flirtation, and just being kind to one another.
Maybe it is just me, but that is the only thing that felt off in this otherwise great story.
5 stars for the hotness factor. Thanks!
Perfect
Another great read.
5 stars
5 star read. Keep lt Up.
Wheeeew
Fucking hot, loved it!
Excellent
I was getting hot just reading this! You have done it again! :)
5 star story!
Hot
Those two were smoking together!!
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