All Comments on 'The Gold Bikini Club Ch. 01'

You've got to love the haters. They obviously get turned on by these stories and are scared of their feelings otherwise they wouldn't bother going through the hassle of posting a comment.

Thanks for your "feedback" guys ;-)

He's right about the heaters. They are closet cuck wannabe's. Keep going; great start!

i have been thinkin about goin to the islands with a girl fr , husband not want to go , so now we are for sure goin just emailed her about this story , we both

getting us a gold bikini to wear first day yumme , so hot great weather and lots of black cock and no one to tell on us

wife and i loved the story mainly because it must be true , she did not get gold bikini but we did have great time in jamaica with some black natives every day we there we both loved it, we are goin back this fall for some more fun, we are emailing the guys we had fun with and looking forward to playing with them again , maybe i will get some gold bikini's and take with us

start a club there, we both luv big black hot cock

good and hot , like get details from rebecca , she must have had lots of r black cock incollege wish i had started back then and not wait till i was older,;

once i accepted black cock i haveto have it more often all the time so adDICKting

Great start. V keen to see where this goes! Ken

Hope you continue to write!

We love this story. Hope to get more soon

Love the story please keep it going can't wait to see what happens next.

Loved it so far ... its a tease.... whens part 2...3...4?

this is going very good i cant wait for more

Thank you for all the kind words! I will get part 2 written ASAP!

If there's anything that anyone would like to see happen in future parts, let me know and I'll see what I can do!

Great so far and a good setup. But still work to be done in developing what comes next. Good Luck.

This sissy faggot just loves this story!

I liked the theme, the introduction and the environment where the story is developed but, personally I find the bikini club story a bit unreal or unprovable to convince myself into the story. Haven't read the rest but looking forward to it.

Oh god I loved this story. The hot Carribean sun, charcoal black chiseled Alpha men seducing snowbird girls in bikinis on golden beaches cooled by the blue ocean waters. Where is this heaven on earth?

I'm hard already, just love these stories, if I was younger I would love and encourage my wife to go black.

Off to part two.

That is a very nice lead-in, as I was totally unprepared for this outcome. Great work.

Good lead in !