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Shadows in Mind Ch. 00 Prologue

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by Anonymous

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by Edwarus03/19/13

Wow

I like it very much so far

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by caesarionr6903/19/13

it is very interesting and i like your writing style
looking forward to the next chapters

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by Etaski03/21/13

Urban horror...pretty rare on this site

Your warning is appropriate and accepted.

It's almost a pity we're leaving the dystopian cyberpunk setting behind already; that was quite good and reminded me strongly of the RPG games Kult and SLA Industries.

Now to wait and see what the other planet looks like.

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