All Comments on 'Penny's Tales - Story 02'

Mmm, enjoyable. I liked this a lot. The fact that you preface it as a true story makes it somehow more exciting, like anything could happen, good or bad. I like the bad. My only complaint was your capitalization (capitalisation? :) of "Him" or "He" or even "You" to refer to your master. Grammatically, it was unnecessary and somewhat distracting. The only place I've seen this type of capitalization used is in scripture, which is where it should stay...unless you're fucking Jesus Christ >=D Just my opinion though. Good writing otherwise.

All I wonder is-- which month is it? You say it is November, then a week later it is June.

Wonderful writing, and much hotter than a lot of the made-up stuff on here.

VanillaExtract apparently hasn't read much BDSM. The choices to capitalize references to the Dom and not-capitalize for the sub really alter the mood of the story and tell a lot about the characters and the author.