All Comments on 'Orality'

by GuGusher

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sheawaitstruelovesheawaitstrueloveabout 11 years ago

delicious and beautiful all at the same time. you've got a soft side and I like that.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Rhythmical....

A nice rhyme scheme.... Although the first stanza rhyme with 'still' seems a bit forced and out of place.... May I suggest something like, "thrill, or trill" (replacing chill)? Thanks for sharing your erotic thoughts....

weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
Suddenly very hungry

A cum milkshake... May I have a few orders please???

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