All Comments on 'Bird'

by Lauren Hynde

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ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
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Would you change this line if you were writing it now?

"before I could feel"

Would: "before I was born" make it stronger?

I don't use the thermo-thingee

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Tight little piece from deep in Lit's vault.

'Before I could feel' says more

Than a 'before I was born' cliché;

Let it stand as written.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Word nuggets.

A mysterious snippet to confound.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
TO STAY DORMANT

allows the bird to survive, TK U MLJ LV NV

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