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Gone to Walmart

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/21/13

Well Hell,

Third loving wives story today I've read. So far all are losers. Will try again. 1* for all so far.

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by Anonymous03/21/13

Well I liked it 5*****

Thanks. tom anon

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by looking4it03/21/13

Cheating aside

If you set the fact that this just cheated on a friend and the whore basically gave in (guessing its not the first time as easy as it was) it was a hot story. Perhaps if it were simply a single neighbor it would be more socially acceptable behavior and better tolerated by the general public. Still, one of the more erotic LW stories I've read recently.

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by Anonymous03/21/13

Nice and hot

No muss no fuss. Just quickie hot sex on the spur of the moment. That Jan sounds like the ideal hot wife. She's in control baby, in control.

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by Lickideesplit03/21/13

Very cute!

So now she is scheduling her rapes! The Good Neighbor policy at its best. Hope Bull's wife likes guys with grease under their fingernails! Or, more likely, Bull can lift a 3,000 lb. car (accidentally) dropped on him! What price pussy???

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by chytown03/21/13

My Word*

What was that crap. Bad day for LW.

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by Anonymous03/21/13

So will be be allowing Mike to fuck his gf or wife considering his actions?

After all, if he helps his friends because he might need help, he won't have a problem with his significant other tucking g other men, right?

I don't care how big he is, I don't care how strong he is: he is a rapist. She said no and he didn't accept it.

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by betrayedbylove03/21/13

Absolute unadulterated garbage

Hopefully Mike went not to the store but to fuck somebody else. Hey, there is chapter 2. Oh shit I hope the author doesn't write another chapter. Shit. My bad.

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by cantbuymy03/21/13

i hate cheating sluts but for some reason this was a good read.

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by LordSlamdawgg03/21/13

Sounds like Mike is better at performing preventative maintinence on his car then his woman.

I enjoyed the molesting her while she's on phone tactic. The sheer effrontry is a role model of how conquering mindsets operate. Women have some kind of weird Pavlovian head space they go into when cellularly engaged - the phone (call ) must go on.

I'm casually guessing the wife was attracted to the neighbor but probably would have fended him off if the narrator hadnt caught her in that weak moment. She thought she could multitask & merely tease him but got lost in sensations.

Ever since Paris Hilton was getting it doggystyle & reached into her purse to answer incoming call- I've always known there's an sensual-aural connection void women have that goes back & forth. This is just a ( good ) stroke story of course but it struck a few meaningful chords.

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by adgeon03/21/13

What a jerk!

Yet it turned me on, lol. Good job author.

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by digdaddyrich03/23/13

What Mike doesn't know

I love stories about sweet little slut wives that will fuck a guy if given the chance.

A great story.

Thanks for the read.

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