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by SweetOblivion03/21/13

The couplets tried to hard

And, alas, you lost any count after line 1 so your couplets became clogged and cumbersome.

It really is not how many words you can get into the line but how you express yourself that counts.

You have an idea for a verse. You might if you structure it properly and seek out something akin to an original idea have a poem. It is probably worth trying again.

I look forward to the results. S.O.

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