Your description of Susan is so vivid that I now have a perfect mental image of a Norse goddess in white with the sun at her back making that 1/2 mile walk down Tremont Street, and I will never need a video to see it again. Great descriptive writing.
There were a few paragraphs that made me just smile in front of my monitor. At least once because of your subtle sense of humor. The other times came when the emotions recalled by Glenn awakened my memories of Boston or coincided with other personal events. A good connection.
Couldn't get any better I thought, but the suspense is growing and I want more!
One of the best parts of this tale is the interweaving of the main male characters, each with their own idea of a fantasy and romance. Who is the real storyteller here, Glenn or Susan? Something tells me there is more to Jimmy and his avoidance of the plot line and Joe's constant reference to the alleged incest relationship with his sister. I do know when I had a May-December relationship many years ago, the young lady I was involved with enjoy my having the guys over for cards, flirting with them and after they left having some of the hottest sex imaginable. Author Susan Jill Parker shows her skills with this series and again it's not the physical sex descriptions that shine. Please keep the thoughts and stories rolling off your grey matter, you are a professional and I only wish it could be more than the allocated 5 stars and my kudos! The Bird
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A very few men get their prayers answered.
Your description of Susan is so vivid that I now have a perfect mental image of a Norse goddess in white with the sun at her back making that 1/2 mile walk down Tremont Street, and I will never need a video to see it again. Great descriptive writing.
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There were a few paragraphs that made me just smile in front of my monitor. At least once because of your subtle sense of humor. The other times came when the emotions recalled by Glenn awakened my memories of Boston or coincided with other personal events. A good connection.
Couldn't get any better I thought, but the suspense is growing and I want more!
One of the best parts of this tale is the interweaving of the main male characters, each with their own idea of a fantasy and romance. Who is the real storyteller here, Glenn or Susan? Something tells me there is more to Jimmy and his avoidance of the plot line and Joe's constant reference to the alleged incest relationship with his sister. I do know when I had a May-December relationship many years ago, the young lady I was involved with enjoy my having the guys over for cards, flirting with them and after they left having some of the hottest sex imaginable. Author Susan Jill Parker shows her skills with this series and again it's not the physical sex descriptions that shine. Please keep the thoughts and stories rolling off your grey matter, you are a professional and I only wish it could be more than the allocated 5 stars and my kudos! The Bird
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