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Seroius Stuff Indeed
I did have to re trad ch.1 and some parts of ch.2 to take on board and digest the meanings in the story.
She indeed live a lie for twenty years and fantasized about her deadover.
The councilor is indeed correct that monotony of daily life looking after a home, child, shopping, cleaning, chatting to other boring house wifes can pursade a wife to seek an exciting affair with a lover.
Well people should do things to break the boring cycle of live. Play Wii tennis with husband, go walks in the park, make him a personal I love you card, bake a cake for him, greet him at the door naked when returns from work. Of course he can do similar ( well not meeting her naked at the front door ).
A little imagination and she would only love her husband who was working hard for her and the children.
With the power of Google now it should be an easy task.
That's what I do with my partner, small surprises, walks, theater, crazy golf, art museums etc
Live life !
I'll add my 2 cents
Of course mine has less worth since I have never written a story (or edited) on this site (or any other)!
BUT just scroll through the comments and you see many good (my opinion) writers who have commented, some with great length! All the ones that I read have been positive even if they did not agree with the way you wrote the characters.
So for me even giving you 5 stars can't be higher praise then you are already getting!
Congratulations on a good story looking for next chapter.
As usual Thank you for writing (and sharing). You keep writing and I will keep reading!!
This is...
CRAP! The first story by RADK was CRAP, the version you plagiarized was CRAP, this is CRAP and I'm sure part three will be no different. Wimpy male characters, asinine female characters, unbelievable situations, inane dialog, and a pseudo-professional from the Twilight Zone. Please stop writing CRAP. Hell, stop writing altogether!
different
Not as good as some of your storys
A very interesting read
Well written and the character development made the story very real and believable.
A very emotional story of a painful time in two people's lives.
Well done. and I will be watching for the next chapter.
Thanks for the read.
I WASN'T GOING TO COMMENT
BUT I HAD TO. IT'S HARD TO DETACH YOURSELF FROM TAKING SIDES, AND IM TRYING HARD NOT TOO. I'VE TRIED TO SEE BOTH SIDES AND I'M COMING AROUND TO A DECISION I WOULD MIGHT HAVE MADE THINKING FROM LOOKING AT BOTH SIDES. I THINK I WOULD HAVE GOT TOGETHER TO SEE IF WE COULD SESOLVE THE ISSUES AND GO ON. I KNOW HE STILL LOVED HER EVEN IF HE SAID HE DIDN'T. WHY THROW IT AWAY UNTIL YOU WERE 100 PERCENT SURE IT COULDN'T BE SAVE. AFTER ALL, WHATS A LITTLE MORE TIME IN THE SCHEME OF THINGS. JUST ME THOUGH.
Great story of forgiveness
Even though this story isn't unique, the author's take on it is, especially for this site. Many authors would have the husband take an uncaring attitude toward the wife in an effort to show that he is over her. They would have him married to a supermodel that just happened to have a crush on him for a dozen or so years. This author's take on it is completely different and refreshing. By showing his forgiveness, he is showing that he is over her. He doesn't hate her anymore, which in my opinion is the sure fire way to show that you still have feelings for the one who did you wrong. If you spend all of your time hating the person, how are you over them? Long story short, this is an EXCELLENT story.
Beautiful!
I loved the negative reinforcement aspect!
A cheater, whether man or woman, needs to understand what they destroyed. They need to be smacked in the face with it, again and again until they can't live with themselves anymore.
Second Comment
She loved two men. Her husband and her lover. She lost her lover in an accident,
Awwwe. Now she lost her husband by being caught. Two lover her. Now no one does. Awwwe
Fucking cunt.
exquisite
exquisite
xxxhugsxxx
Well done.
You tell a good story. I have to admit I started this story hoping for some erotica, but I'm having a good time reading it regardless, you wrote it well, and you hooked me. Now I've got to finish the series, it doesn't matter that it's one forty AM and I have to get up early, I'm going for the next chapter.
Excellent
Your story tells so much in so little. There's no drawn out confrontation no endless drama, you just give a little nudge and we readers fill the rest of the blanks ourselves.
This was good.
Chapter III stunk, delete it and have this one be the ending.
5* for Chapeters 2 and 3. Only 2* for Chapter 3.
Chapter 3 was a very poor ending to this very good tale up til then. Pity!
vile
It's offensive.
what a horrible RaaC ,I feel soiled .
This is curious...
I read this way back, scored it a five, and moved on without comment. Now I've come back and there's a part three. Why I wonder. It ended well at the close of part two. Of course, if Lynn is like me she doesn't like leaving characters of she likes them.
I see she's done nothing in quite a while. I hope she's all right.
Jedd Clampett
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