All Comments on 'Life as a Rogue'

by HexGlow

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
keep us hanging

Very good start to the story, don't know if she is ill, pregnant, or terrified. You can make this go many different ways. Keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Holy shit

You've got me hooked already

Keep 'em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice beginning

Well, you've certainly got the hook! Write again soon, it's got a lot of potential.

fanticyfanticyabout 11 years ago
really interesting

cant wait to read more :)

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 11 years ago
Great start!

Who are they? Must know!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

great start can't wait to find out why amy seemed so sickly and nearly fainted

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow

need to read more please epic write more please

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76about 11 years ago

Nice start....need to know more. Write another chapter soon, have to know who they are and why she left her own pack?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
You have done well, young grasshopper

Very nice first story. Multiple questions, much intrigue. You have us hooked. Please don't torture us with the wait.

RheamistressRheamistressabout 11 years ago

You make me want to know more.. hurry with the next chapter... please??? :)

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonabout 11 years ago
Great start

Please don't make us wait to long to know more. I have so many questions already and must find out the answers. Keep going!!!

patrrhopatrrhoabout 11 years ago
Awesome

This is very good. Impatiently awaiting the next submission. :-)

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiabout 11 years ago
good

Good start. I hope you get into more detail with the next chapter.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOabout 11 years ago

Great start but way to short....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Interesting !!

Abit short but interesting....when do we get the next chapter : ))

LessGoLessGoabout 11 years ago
Great!

Love it!! Totally intrigued! Please continue!

MSBLING59MSBLING59about 11 years ago
OK, U GOT MY ATTENTION

NOW WHEN ARE U GOING TO POST THE NEXT INSTALLMENT? MAKE IT LONGER PLEASE

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
An intiguing start.

I'm off to read ch2.

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