All Comments on 'Judge Not 04'

Well written story. Very timely in its' message. Thank you

CONGRATULATIONS. Your story is so well written I forgot that I was looking for salacious enjoyment when I opened it. It keeps readers hooked by tension and pace. Although Nathan and Shelby learn quickly how much they love each other, their struggle against the holy remains in the balance until the end. The sex scenes, when they finally appear, are in keeping with their youth and experience level. WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING.

Very wonderful... Nathan's musing spwere exactly my thoughts :)

Thanks for sharing

Nice ending and it seems you closed out the matter perfectly - albeit this is the end?

very thought provoking

Well written.