All Comments on 'BFF's Husband's B'day Request'

thanks for the story, it's a fun read with a few typos but it's still good. I really like the female point of view and the honest feelings of not wanting to hurt or come between the married couple.

You can't use "OMFG" when you write. This isn't a text message. Use your words.

Write with real words you are not 12 years old or are you and you should not be on this web site

Sex story thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the exciting story. Maybe a basic setup, but you added a few new twists to keep it fresh. I like that (I'm sure others do too). Please keep up the good work.

Good story especially for your first one. Ignore the comments dinging your story. I agree that you shouldn't use text message acronyms but that's not a big deal and it's a part of common language nowadays.

Write lots more, please, Nymph! Nice oral sex, and ease among friends.

The use of the acronyms (OMG) would have completely been unnoticed by me, if other commenters had not mentioned it.

Even so, it's a nonissue.

And better than spelling it out in words,

It was a good little 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 story as far as it went.

But it did not go far enough.

Wish nymph357 had more stories.

Paul in Oklahoma

Just as bad as if it had been his friend involved. Cheap, overused LW plot.

Nice. This very enjoyable. I love that you understand the importance of using correct English by saying Janie and I rather than the disgusting me and Janie. Well done, it was very classy. That said, you used the wrong word for a body shaking. You used the word shutter instead of shudder. A Shutter is a covering for a window or door, not a physical response.

Over all a very interesting and well written story.

Way too rushed, kind of disjointed, just not well written, sorry.