I am looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you for sharing this sexy post!
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Anonymous03/23/13
what was that/you call that a story
lets see 8 inches on a male is rare and we above the norm of 5.5-6 inches.. now you say this black guy hAS 11.5 INCHES, not likley, only freaks have it that large and it be tought to get it to work. big porn star holmes hadonly 10 inches.. so this qwriter make up this unreal story.. get a life your pathetic
not sure i can take that much cock in my throat , so far 9 is most
that i have swallowed , and that too several times practicng
but ahhhhhh maybe i should try him
great i love to see my wife taking big black cock it turns her on just like the girl in the story and me also , we have not met a cock that big yet but i think we ready too, hope it will be soon , we both luv suckin black cock
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Anonymous03/23/13
Formulaic IR Crap
Gee Let's see? How many times has this theme been done? Erotic Couplings.Group, IR Yes. Loving Wives? I think not. BTW I see JJ's drones have antied up as usual. Preditable wouldn't you say?
Big Cock or small cock . What matter more is the man it's connected to !
If it's a black guy ! YUK !!!! But to be honest I'm the wrong woman to comment on that, Since I believe in Validity . Married 29 years never strayed and proud of It ! Just like to read nothing more nothing less !
Love to watch my wife suck and fuck a BBC. A heavy cummer that leaves a LOAD in her pussy. Then we can play in the heavy juice that is there. Love a wet just fucked pussy. By the way a cock don't have to be 9,10 ,11 in. or more. Just be good and hard and pump a load.
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Anonymous03/23/13
So your wife ISN'T religious then?
I'm no Christian; but it seems that religion frowns on extramarital sex, so she can't really be that religious. And the plot was so contrived that it almost felt by the numbers. Hot, shy religious wife? Check. Hung black man? Check. Getting naked in a hot tub? Done. Ok. So let's wrap this baby up so my wife will have sex with another man and his wife because I'm getting tired of writing? Check and check.
You, sir, are a retard and non erotic has its own category. Feel free to post there as much as you want.
It is my opinion that the story would have been better, if race wasn't even mentioned, and cock size wasn't exaggerated.
If her husband was a normal six to six and a half inches long, and her lover's cock was eight inches long and beer can thick would have made the story more believable.
If she wasn't on birth conrol and her husband has had a vasectomy because he didn't want children, would have made fucking her lover bare back like Russian Roulette, and the thought of her becoming pregnant by her lover would be exciting to her, and have her husband worrying.
I can visualize her coming to the kitchen the next morning, with her pussy gapping open from fucking her lover's hugely thick cock and his cum still dripping out of her throbbing pussy, with her embarrassed thinking she could be pregnant with her lover's child
Of course it was the author's story that got my mind working and thinking of all of the other avenues the story could take, and I commend the author on his very erotic story.
Big cock stories always make me laugh. The author must think it's erotic, but many don't, but rather know that most women would run off screaming at sight of an eleven inch penis. Weird!!
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Anonymous03/24/13
Yuck
Just another BBC story, and not a particularly good one
by
Anonymous03/24/13
1*
Need I say more?
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Anonymous03/24/13
RonK1966
What's it like to write a story knowing your stories score averages out to be a '1'? Sucks to be you!!!
Why does a devout Baptist school teacher impose on her Hubby to meet a new couple at a BAR for DRINKS? It seems the Bull has an itch, and Bull-Sweetie is game to help him despoil her colleague!
Hubby is a selfish asshole who has no respect for his wife, and cannot see past his 'lucky' score on Bull-Sweetie (which is very likely to, in itself risk his marriage).
"She was ready to take Joe's cum deep into the bowels of her pussy."
As opposed to "deep into the bowels of her bowels"
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Anonymous03/24/13
No answer
No answer to everything requested in the biography. The story is so simplistic that it has not much value. Though this is part 1, I find no appeal in reading it anymore. There is so much opportunity to stretch the imagination of the readers if only the author write more on the wife emotional rollercoaster on her behaviour that contradict to her strong Baptist religious view..
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Anonymous03/24/13
Great Story
If the negative bitches don't like this type of story they don't have to read it. They are the some people that bitch about EVERYTHING! I look forward to the next chapter. Gave it a 5*!
What I find interesting is all the negative comments by those that refuse to even post a portion of their names. I forgot to mention that this is a true story. The lack of eroticism may be that I am lacking as a professional writer. I wrote what I remembered that night.
I really enjoyed the comment from the lady that mentioned she had been married 20+ years and has never nor would ever cheat on her husband. Why are you on this site and reading from this genre?
By the way, my wife cannot cheat on me, if I am present. As I mentioned, it was the most erotic display I have ever witnessed. She was drunk, and more uninhibited than I have ever seen her. Her actions may have been a reaction to seeing me with Joe's wife. I find it interesting that only the non-religious people would ever find themselves in a situation like this,according to the CRITICS
When was it illegal for religious people to go to bars? It also served food and was a local favorite in our neighborhood. My wife rarely drinks more than two glasses of wine in a 24 hour period and I was amazed that she was matching us drink for drink.. If not for that, I doubt this adventure would have happened.
Gee, I feel real bad for those that did not like my writing style and question what was written. I will probably lose sleep over their comment. lol
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Anonymous03/26/13
Keep it real...
Do you have any idea what is ELEVEN inches?No woman can take that all...its a pony cock, not a man.
In many i had in my life, i can tell the best one was a guy with seven and a half and a japanese guy with less than six inches(probably five and a quarter).The japanese was skilled like a GOD, and twenty years later, i can remember him.
I had nine inches before, and the only thing good is the self-confidence of the guy(who knows he is well endowed).But thats all.Oh, i stand five-ten tall, i have big hips and ass..i think its funny your wife can take him all...
Why am here since I have never cheated and never will ? That's a simple one. I like to read, nothing more nothing less. Ron, let me tell you it's sad that's all you got out of my comment. What I was trying to get a cross is most women don't care how big a man is. It matters who that are ! I for one do not find black men attractive. Just being honest. I do not know you or your wife, but willing to bet she fells bad that she broke her vows, if no,t you mite want to start looking for a new bride :)
lacked details but otherwise a phenomenal story with incredible series capabilities! I would love to see this same story with a slower burn where the couple are seduced over a few chapters/encounters. But I very much enjoyed your story and can't wait to read another one very soon!
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Anonymous05/22/13
Not very credible
I prefer a story to be believable. A reserved, strict Baptist churchgoer would never roll over so quickly. Quite possibly with a degree of seduction and over time but come on...not like this. A life time's upbringing does not change in half an hour.
More believable makes it more sexy.
Lots of potential but keep it credible.
Great story and a lot of husbands secret fantasy. I'd love to watch my wife get laid by a black guy with such a huge cock.
by
Anonymous09/01/14
Disgusting
Both that his wife is a complete slut and that he'd allow it to happen. How can he stand up without a spine?
by
Anonymous11/27/14
Where's chapter 2?
Keep going!
by
Anonymous08/03/15
my innocent wife
I watched my wife fucked by huge cock. After sucking the guy's 10 inch, he arranged her doggie style. He asked her to spread her cheeks and then he brutally jammed half of his cock in. My wife cried with pain, but he ignored her until he was balls deep in her. When he came, he folded her legs to her shoulders. I could see cumming out around his cock. My wifes body trembled through her powerful orgasm.
My part was cleaning her pussy,
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Anonymous09/05/15
my hot wife
I can say that all women love a big dick, but no woman loves a man because he has a big dick.
Regardless of the small innocent pussy, two men with a good erotic massage and then a good foreplay can easily prepare any woman for good sex, with good erotic massage and foreplay. but if you think about the poor quality of sex as a porn forget about it. Our friend is not black but white guy with a huge dick. when he's fucking my wife I stimulate all of her erogenous zones, in different ways. I always enjoy my wife but it's wonderfully seen as he so merciless penetrates in her so innocent and greedy, naughty, little puffy pussy his so huge dick, I think she's addicted to sex, so I enjoy a lot of sex with her. Most often alone, but also often with the help of our friend. This kind of sex can be beautiful, but all this is not recommended for people who are not in good and reasonable connection. So think good about this.
by
Anonymous09/13/15
Glad you never finished this garbage
He's lost his slut wife to a big black cock. Could it be any more cliched? Bad.
by
Anonymous04/01/16
1*
cuck shit
by
Anonymous01/05/17
my wife is curious
My wife loved this story. She wants to be that lucky.
English
Gee, another BBC story
How original.
Hot start!
I am looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you for sharing this sexy post!
what was that/you call that a story
lets see 8 inches on a male is rare and we above the norm of 5.5-6 inches.. now you say this black guy hAS 11.5 INCHES, not likley, only freaks have it that large and it be tought to get it to work. big porn star holmes hadonly 10 inches.. so this qwriter make up this unreal story.. get a life your pathetic
nice
not sure i can take that much cock in my throat , so far 9 is most
that i have swallowed , and that too several times practicng
but ahhhhhh maybe i should try him
HOT
great i love to see my wife taking big black cock it turns her on just like the girl in the story and me also , we have not met a cock that big yet but i think we ready too, hope it will be soon , we both luv suckin black cock
Formulaic IR Crap
Gee Let's see? How many times has this theme been done? Erotic Couplings.Group, IR Yes. Loving Wives? I think not. BTW I see JJ's drones have antied up as usual. Preditable wouldn't you say?
PLease !!!
Big Cock or small cock . What matter more is the man it's connected to !
If it's a black guy ! YUK !!!! But to be honest I'm the wrong woman to comment on that, Since I believe in Validity . Married 29 years never strayed and proud of It ! Just like to read nothing more nothing less !
I agree with James
Love to watch my wife suck and fuck a BBC. A heavy cummer that leaves a LOAD in her pussy. Then we can play in the heavy juice that is there. Love a wet just fucked pussy. By the way a cock don't have to be 9,10 ,11 in. or more. Just be good and hard and pump a load.
So your wife ISN'T religious then?
I'm no Christian; but it seems that religion frowns on extramarital sex, so she can't really be that religious. And the plot was so contrived that it almost felt by the numbers. Hot, shy religious wife? Check. Hung black man? Check. Getting naked in a hot tub? Done. Ok. So let's wrap this baby up so my wife will have sex with another man and his wife because I'm getting tired of writing? Check and check.
You, sir, are a retard and non erotic has its own category. Feel free to post there as much as you want.
It is my opinion that the story would have been better, if race wasn't even mentioned, and cock size wasn't exaggerated.
If her husband was a normal six to six and a half inches long, and her lover's cock was eight inches long and beer can thick would have made the story more believable.
If she wasn't on birth conrol and her husband has had a vasectomy because he didn't want children, would have made fucking her lover bare back like Russian Roulette, and the thought of her becoming pregnant by her lover would be exciting to her, and have her husband worrying.
I can visualize her coming to the kitchen the next morning, with her pussy gapping open from fucking her lover's hugely thick cock and his cum still dripping out of her throbbing pussy, with her embarrassed thinking she could be pregnant with her lover's child
Of course it was the author's story that got my mind working and thinking of all of the other avenues the story could take, and I commend the author on his very erotic story.
Thanks for the read...
Freak show
Big cock stories always make me laugh. The author must think it's erotic, but many don't, but rather know that most women would run off screaming at sight of an eleven inch penis. Weird!!
Yuck
Just another BBC story, and not a particularly good one
1*
Need I say more?
RonK1966
What's it like to write a story knowing your stories score averages out to be a '1'? Sucks to be you!!!
Bad start - - poorer follow-through
Why does a devout Baptist school teacher impose on her Hubby to meet a new couple at a BAR for DRINKS? It seems the Bull has an itch, and Bull-Sweetie is game to help him despoil her colleague!
Hubby is a selfish asshole who has no respect for his wife, and cannot see past his 'lucky' score on Bull-Sweetie (which is very likely to, in itself risk his marriage).
Disastrous editing!
2*
"She was ready to take Joe's cum deep into the bowels of her pussy."
As opposed to "deep into the bowels of her bowels"
No answer
No answer to everything requested in the biography. The story is so simplistic that it has not much value. Though this is part 1, I find no appeal in reading it anymore. There is so much opportunity to stretch the imagination of the readers if only the author write more on the wife emotional rollercoaster on her behaviour that contradict to her strong Baptist religious view..
Great Story
If the negative bitches don't like this type of story they don't have to read it. They are the some people that bitch about EVERYTHING! I look forward to the next chapter. Gave it a 5*!
Great Story!
Loved your story! I hope you continue...
Great first chapter!
Can't wait for more!!
My Critics comments
What I find interesting is all the negative comments by those that refuse to even post a portion of their names. I forgot to mention that this is a true story. The lack of eroticism may be that I am lacking as a professional writer. I wrote what I remembered that night.
I really enjoyed the comment from the lady that mentioned she had been married 20+ years and has never nor would ever cheat on her husband. Why are you on this site and reading from this genre?
By the way, my wife cannot cheat on me, if I am present. As I mentioned, it was the most erotic display I have ever witnessed. She was drunk, and more uninhibited than I have ever seen her. Her actions may have been a reaction to seeing me with Joe's wife. I find it interesting that only the non-religious people would ever find themselves in a situation like this,according to the CRITICS
When was it illegal for religious people to go to bars? It also served food and was a local favorite in our neighborhood. My wife rarely drinks more than two glasses of wine in a 24 hour period and I was amazed that she was matching us drink for drink.. If not for that, I doubt this adventure would have happened.
Gee, I feel real bad for those that did not like my writing style and question what was written. I will probably lose sleep over their comment. lol
Keep it real...
Do you have any idea what is ELEVEN inches?No woman can take that all...its a pony cock, not a man.
In many i had in my life, i can tell the best one was a guy with seven and a half and a japanese guy with less than six inches(probably five and a quarter).The japanese was skilled like a GOD, and twenty years later, i can remember him.
I had nine inches before, and the only thing good is the self-confidence of the guy(who knows he is well endowed).But thats all.Oh, i stand five-ten tall, i have big hips and ass..i think its funny your wife can take him all...
cheers,
Spanish Whore.
To The Author
Why am here since I have never cheated and never will ? That's a simple one. I like to read, nothing more nothing less. Ron, let me tell you it's sad that's all you got out of my comment. What I was trying to get a cross is most women don't care how big a man is. It matters who that are ! I for one do not find black men attractive. Just being honest. I do not know you or your wife, but willing to bet she fells bad that she broke her vows, if no,t you mite want to start looking for a new bride :)
Awesome story!
lacked details but otherwise a phenomenal story with incredible series capabilities! I would love to see this same story with a slower burn where the couple are seduced over a few chapters/encounters. But I very much enjoyed your story and can't wait to read another one very soon!
Not very credible
I prefer a story to be believable. A reserved, strict Baptist churchgoer would never roll over so quickly. Quite possibly with a degree of seduction and over time but come on...not like this. A life time's upbringing does not change in half an hour.
More believable makes it more sexy.
Lots of potential but keep it credible.
My wife
Great story and a lot of husbands secret fantasy. I'd love to watch my wife get laid by a black guy with such a huge cock.
Disgusting
Both that his wife is a complete slut and that he'd allow it to happen. How can he stand up without a spine?
Where's chapter 2?
Keep going!
my innocent wife
I watched my wife fucked by huge cock. After sucking the guy's 10 inch, he arranged her doggie style. He asked her to spread her cheeks and then he brutally jammed half of his cock in. My wife cried with pain, but he ignored her until he was balls deep in her. When he came, he folded her legs to her shoulders. I could see cumming out around his cock. My wifes body trembled through her powerful orgasm.
My part was cleaning her pussy,
my hot wife
I can say that all women love a big dick, but no woman loves a man because he has a big dick.
Regardless of the small innocent pussy, two men with a good erotic massage and then a good foreplay can easily prepare any woman for good sex, with good erotic massage and foreplay. but if you think about the poor quality of sex as a porn forget about it. Our friend is not black but white guy with a huge dick. when he's fucking my wife I stimulate all of her erogenous zones, in different ways. I always enjoy my wife but it's wonderfully seen as he so merciless penetrates in her so innocent and greedy, naughty, little puffy pussy his so huge dick, I think she's addicted to sex, so I enjoy a lot of sex with her. Most often alone, but also often with the help of our friend. This kind of sex can be beautiful, but all this is not recommended for people who are not in good and reasonable connection. So think good about this.
Glad you never finished this garbage
He's lost his slut wife to a big black cock. Could it be any more cliched? Bad.
1*
cuck shit
my wife is curious
My wife loved this story. She wants to be that lucky.
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