Wow. i love this story . i give you five golden stars you deserve and more.
I can't wait for the.next installment . Keep up the great work with your
beautiful writing style thanks again!!!!
by
Anonymous03/24/13
love this story
I love this story but I've read it before a long time ago. Are you doing a follow up or what.
This is a really good story I can not wait until I am able to read the rest of your works.
by
Anonymous03/28/13
From a longtime fan...
Glad you're putting these back up, Ava. I really did miss you and your writing. I understand that leaving is your choice and your right, but I'm still sad that I won't be able to read anything new of yours. Hope all is well in your life-- TJ
by
Anonymous12/23/13
conflicting emotions
i'm having mixed feelings about this story.. i don't like incest stories..but then this is really? incest Oo?
i mean they're siblings, but their not techniquely related. but they were raised since they were babies as sibling with the same parents.
the story seems good. but i confused. i don't know if i want them together or... i feel a little bit like a pervert myself for wanting them to be together. but at the same time...they don't have the same biological parents..although they were raised that way? so confused O.o?
i mean speaking for myself personally, i could never be sexually attracted to anyone i've thought of as family and grew up with my whole life (cousins, siblings, etc) regardless of whether we are biologically realted or not :/
so...i'm going to try and give this a try...if it gets to weird...eh..?
on another note this story is very intriguing, regardless of my mixed feelings. and written well enough that i'm still giving it a chance dispite myself lol
I wonder how long it will take before the parents notice the attraction between them.
*****
Engaging storyline, appealing characters, exceptional writing. What's not to like?
Five.
Familiar
I already this story a long time ago
Wow!
That was a great start. Wow the sexual chemistry between them is awesome. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. I hope love!
great start
Wow. i love this story . i give you five golden stars you deserve and more.
I can't wait for the.next installment . Keep up the great work with your
beautiful writing style thanks again!!!!
love this story
I love this story but I've read it before a long time ago. Are you doing a follow up or what.
and the parents can see they way they feel
You are back!
Hey, you are back.
Emma and Sam - nice to read about them again.
This is a really good story I can not wait until I am able to read the rest of your works.
From a longtime fan...
Glad you're putting these back up, Ava. I really did miss you and your writing. I understand that leaving is your choice and your right, but I'm still sad that I won't be able to read anything new of yours. Hope all is well in your life-- TJ
conflicting emotions
i'm having mixed feelings about this story.. i don't like incest stories..but then this is really? incest Oo?
i mean they're siblings, but their not techniquely related. but they were raised since they were babies as sibling with the same parents.
the story seems good. but i confused. i don't know if i want them together or... i feel a little bit like a pervert myself for wanting them to be together. but at the same time...they don't have the same biological parents..although they were raised that way? so confused O.o?
i mean speaking for myself personally, i could never be sexually attracted to anyone i've thought of as family and grew up with my whole life (cousins, siblings, etc) regardless of whether we are biologically realted or not :/
so...i'm going to try and give this a try...if it gets to weird...eh..?
on another note this story is very intriguing, regardless of my mixed feelings. and written well enough that i'm still giving it a chance dispite myself lol
Not for me. I had to read half a page, though, to find out that the heroine was black and (presumably) the Hero was white
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