I like how wolfey the boys are in the group sex scene. The importance of smell, the sensual/sensory details are very evocative. Your use of idiomatic speech, accents is well done and pulled me in. Also the allusion to Max's violent encounter with Col and how it played in to his sexual release really resonated for me.
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A nice sexy scene that gives us more than just that. We get more pieces of Max and this wolf world and quite the cliffhanger!
This is very fun!
I like how wolfey the boys are in the group sex scene. The importance of smell, the sensual/sensory details are very evocative. Your use of idiomatic speech, accents is well done and pulled me in. Also the allusion to Max's violent encounter with Col and how it played in to his sexual release really resonated for me.
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