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English
Present tense. No puntuation in dialogue.
Should have paid attention in school. It would have saved you the pain of this effort.
Quotation marks are NOT optional
I stopped after the first sentences. If you can't learn the basics, why should I try to decipher your mess?
I don't expect polished, professional level writing, but I do expect some evidence that the writer has a basic understanding of the English language. There is none in this story.
Loving Wife
Excellent. No cheating here. Had a fantasy and then attacked her husband. If more wives acted like that the divorce rate would go way down.
Husbands also. No double standard here.
Good Fantasy
A good short story on how a naughty though about another person can put to good user with your partner. As lo.g as she does not physically cheats then all is well in the marriage.
Yeah - lame.
But thanks for writing. 3*
great!
continue please
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