All Comments on 'A Sticky Wicket Ch. 02'

For the read.

I gave you three stars for quality writing but this chapter was so preposterous it doesn't even work in fiction.

Another commenter on another story mentioned that wives with submissive personalities were a total nightmare if not managed and that was while knowing they were submissive. If you didn't know, oh boy!

Jack's old man and his mum should have been destroyed for that level of betrayal. Normally it's the grandparents protecting the cheater so as not to be removed from the grandkid's lives (or instigating to create the grandkids). Nice twist on a common theme.

I enjoyed reading your story. It was well worth the wait.

Very anti-climatic. Thanks for the offering.

Mat it left me flat. Sorry to have to say that.

I think that flat describes this chapter perfectly. What was the point? Everyone lives happily ever after when the cheating slut submissive wife is healed? Sorry, it doesn't compute.

It was a waste of time.

It wrapped up the first chapter....

Contrary to some others, I liked it.

The point of counseling (or therapy) is the betterment of the counselee. If improvement, correction, redemption and repair are not good things why do we have schools, coaches, books or anything or person to help people overcome their mistakes? This was a fine story...a "5" without question.

But just for fun and penance Wendy should've become their bisexual sex concubine.... Just for shits & giggles.

I agree that it did not hurt the first chapter, and it provided the reasons for the infidelity. Surprisingly enough, I thought it a good story. One always has to accept the fact that in these cheating wife stories the wife always loves the husband madly but still does things that will hurt him for selfish reasons and then tries to hide them. The premise is of course stupid, because when one loves someone they will not risk losing them with affairs. However, there seems to be a formula in most of these stories that requires this, otherwise we would have boring stories of cheating wives doing what they do because they no longer care about their husbands feelings wouldn't we? Then all the wails, tears, shock, grieving, and anger, would be rather boring because the husband could get very little emotional revenge by dumping the uncaring bitch... Everyone would have to maim or kill the bitch and her lover/s for any kind of meaningful revenge! Some of us just wait long enough to get over the stages of grief and shock and quit caring...which is the real opposite of love. Then we move on and find someone else to give us the love we seek. I really do think that love/despair and hate/revenge are the two sides of the same coin. The stories about moving on and finding another seem far more sensible to me. That's why StangStar Papatoad and WinterFrog appeal to me I guess. Yet, this is what happens here in the first part as well. He just moved on with Sarah...

A 'UK' writer who uses 'snuck' instead of sneaked? I don't think so. And a Brit who actually believes that 'therapy' has some value? Fairytale stuff.

An intelligent writer to know when to stop, in your case it should have been after ch01 as you had a complete story there which you have managed to destroy here in this chapter, mores the pity.

Not my favorite style but appreciated. 4*

The first chapter was much better, both in premice and flow. The second chapter seems a bit awkward and doesn't flow smoothly. It is kind of difficult to follow. I liked it and hope this writer keeps trying.

On another front snuck beats the crap out of sneaked and drug and dragged', who cares. My guess is the dragged and therapy commenter uses loo instead of shitter.

Keep writing and you will improve.

The Father is jealous of his son? Why? And his Mother supported the Father and felt they had done nothing wrong? I thought the son was happy in the IT position and didn't care to run the business? And how would either of them EVER accept Wendy as a Godparent? What kind of example would she be setting for the children? And the therapist suddenly loves the slut Wendy and wants to ruin his career? Once again, I am baffled by the outcome.

Should have been a one chapter story, THIS was NOT needed and did not answer the majority of the unanswered questions from chapter 1. And stop with all the exclamation marks, they're just not needed.

She's still a cheating slut. The Father and the Mother have to go on the list as the worst parents ever. Gran is my favorite. And why did you write this?

I guess I am a little vindictive. I think a part 02 would be ok if the story was about Wendy turning into a street whore in London, getting hook on drugs then dieing in some gutter. Or possibly marrying Steve and he turns out to be abusive asshole who then turns her out on the street to earn money for him. You know something nice for her. You know a nice happy ending for her. Of course this is a story not real life.

Gee, a whole chapter of shlocky 'happy endings!'. I am ashamed that I didn't figure out, one-quarter of the way in, that such was the case ... so I could skip the rest.

2*

1 star.

Made no sense. You cannot have a relationship with a patient or former patient. EVER. He would have lost his license as u could not hide the marriage.

5 for effort and content, eat shit anony

I forgot the ending. What the fuck!

3 stars for a fun follow up.

I'm stingy with stars so 3 is a good rating for me.

The therapist takes up with a patient, his parents still fail to see what was wrong with what they did? Seemed rushed to me...

is knowledge is like a 4-out, TK U MLJ LV NV

That the parents didn't suffer any repercussions, leaves this story rather unfinished.

I can't envision a parent who'd do what that "father" did to his son or the way that "mother" covered it up. If such were their natures, I think they wouldn't have been bothered the least with the lack of any relationship with their grandchildren.

There wasn't even a tone of regret that they would never know their grandchild. They got off too easy, and even Beth walked away relatively unharmed. The other contributors...

Sorry just a mess, and it didn't seem to contain enough consequences for the cheaters.

Some commenters express concern with no parental rapprochement.

But fear naught. Momma learned the joys of flavored libes. So did papa.

They taste like truffles, you know.

life as we know it will go forward. TK U MLJ LV NV

Tazz317 please shut the fuck up your like sayings are just dumb and have no meaning!

AGAIN TAZZ317 SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!

In Cricket terminology LBW is " legs before wicket " But in this story! LBW Large Bore Whore " Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

Oh Oh Oh What would have been a better story Idea is for him to come in on a LESBIAN LICKEE FEST SHE-IT THE WHOLE TOWN WOULD HAVE TURNED OUT HELL YEAH! LBW LATENT BISEXUAL WOMAN BYE

That alone was worth the price of admission. And to the naysayers; write your own stories if you think you can do better.

A charming and witty piece of whimsy. Beautifully written and not a googly in sight.

LA

Paul could have had his vasectomy reversed. But maybe he didn’t want to have Wendy’s kids. 😁

Enjoyed this interesting little tale of a wife submitting to a louse.

Well done

Although a nice American story*, with a Pollyanna ending, it did nothing for finishing a story that had already finished at Ch1.

*yeah, I know it was set in England

PS I thought Scotch was just called Whisky in GB.

Only the Brits could invent a game as weird and boring as cricket.

Only Brits would ever consider having Jack forgive Whorezilla after what she'd put him through. Fair enough, they're divorced, but he still forgave her when she went to cry to him like a fucking dog. I'd have pissed on her and told her to find the cricket team and have them all fuck each other to death. Only Brits could be this fucked up. They're the wimpiest cunts on earth

Really enjoyed it, but was thoroughly grateful that it didn’t last long. Not much ever happens. What’s the appeal. No wonder world wide the tv audience for cricket is four times that of baseball. In fact by many measures it is the biggest sport in the world.

A happy ending for Wendy, and with her therapist at that. Ruined the story for me.

Was really skewed by his parents. They were cold hearted cunts, especially the mother. And face it, in a real small village, nobody would be so understanding toward the whore, even with the shrink boytoy.

Made the story complete.

Sill hate seeing Wendy get a happy ending . Sure would like to know the Shakespeare bag though.

...and Shakespeare is often called the "Bard of Avon".

Vasectomies can usually be reversed, if the man changes his mind (or wife, as in this tale).

Jack's father was a sleazy character, not a likeable one.

Thanks for sharing your work, MattBlack!

Would the counselor want anything to do with this cheap whore?I mean, he knows that anytime someone observant wants to fuck her she's gonna give it up. With no regard for his feelings. No, he's a guy who would know not to get involved with a skank in waiting.

Loved it, wish my father had fucked my wife when he was alive.

Pretty unnecessary sequel!

From the twisted Mind of Matt Black

"any sexual liaisons between the two of us would be of not possible threat to our marriage and that telling him would only upset him unnecessarily." - I guess THAT didn't work!

Did anyone in the village put any stock in whatever she might have said about Sarah, knowing what Wendy did?

@26thNC, I'm surprised you didn't get the Bard/barred gag! Having said that, "Barred" shouldn't have been capitalized.

excellent writing.

Sort of creepy having her get with the therapist.

And really ethically getting with a current patient he just stopped seeing is still a violation. And something frankly that should alarm anyone that knows or cares for her.

The therapist would be a predator playing on the feelings he caused the patient to have, especially if she was a submissive.

Otherwise well done.

You are gonna do a Shakespeare, me old China!

I’m an American so not sure what this means but loved it anyway.

Wisquejac you were right to pick it up as a quip/joke ...

"... You're fuckin' Barred!" (read "Bard") - Shakespeare was/is referred to as the "olde Bard"

The therapist should get therapy, what with having relationship with a mentally and sexually unstable patient. He must have some hidden need to get cuckolded real bad.

It didn't add anything your first unbelievable part. You changed the wife's character in this one to make her a more human. Completely forgetable.

The first part could have stood on its own but I did leave comments regarding why she did it and what happened with his job. You answered those questions so 5* for the series.

One commenter said this made her more human. More diabolical, you mean. Unbelievable.

This story ruins the first part .

One star

This was unnecessary. Part one told the story.

what a great ending thankyou

Ok…. A good ending. Some people (Jack’s parents) are just dumb fucks. Thanks I enjoyed this story!

This was one of your better ones, I feel.

I do think ole Steve deserved more consequences

Your sequels simply ruin your original stories. Thank you for writing .

This follow up ruined the first part. You totally fucked up!! Who cares about the village slut, even worse she's now babysitting for Jack and Sarah!!

Utter drivel

I loved it

1 star. First part was great and 5 stars. This was awful. The cheating bitch got a happy ending she didn't deserve and whole bunch of hogwash psych excuses for her betrayal. The "parents" got minor hurt of not seeing grandchildren, but a happy retirement. The therapist not only got fucked over by not having kids of his own, but is now stuck with the cheating bitch. Doctor, heal thyself.

Good story and little Sarah was lovely

Well crafted and good tale, its fiction (I think). Ignore the sad BTBers and other associated idiots. Keep writing your stuff your way 5*s

Good story.

But the parents angle were pretty much left half way

It could have been much much better if the story was a bit elaborated.

Decent...

Not bad.

Liked it.

More rapprochement than I expected with Wendy, Jack, and Sarah, while still being a good wrap-up.

Some of the hopefully excellent intimacy of our new couple would tie this up even better...

Thanks for the read!

Part 2 was even worse than Part 1!