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You make them so real
And you made me cry...more than once. I love the depth of this story and how real their emotions are. You are a fantastic writer and I agree with those that keep saying that you should be published. Great work :-D
happyyy
Im so happy Nicholas got it together. I cried a little, good job!
OH, YES!
I am so happy that Lit finally decided your chappies.
Very happy that they decided to keep Mai. I thought they gave her up for adoption since I didn't see her character in The Patriot.
Well, I just love how things fell into place with Jaydee, Mai/Adie, Kolya and Gracie.
I confess....
I read this chapter this morning and cried when Nicholas did, the scene was so poignant and beautiful and touching. I am in awe of your writing skills and your characterizations of Grace and Nicholas and even Adie.
I can't wait to read more.
You are a VERY good writer.
I have been obsessed with finishing this story since either New Year's or the day before. I started with Racing from Love. I'm about to be late for work. I have stopped looking for updates on other stories on Literotica in order to finish reading the complete series. Never has a story kept me enthralled like this. It's amazing how life gets in the way of a good story...lol
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