would have been better to mention a 3 sibling in the 1st ch. plus that makes them triplets not twins.
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Anonymous03/28/13
Fucking hot
So sucking fucking hot. Just love it when I am up to my balls and tonsils in hot cunt. More and more please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's, uk.
Thanks again, everybody. I can't believe these stories are going over so well. Ch. 3-Part 1 will be written soon, I promise. Then two shortly after. Part 1 will be about Jack and his mother. Part 2 will be about Jasmine and Jade seducing their father. I think three will turn out well. Four will be my final installment in the series, but I will probably will revisit this world sometime in the future.
Anyway, thanks again for all your feedback and everything. See you in about a week.
P.S. For those you are wondering, Alex and Emma Ch. 2 will probably be here in about a month, I hope. Won't be much longer.
Since all three were born at the same time that would make them triplets, but perhaps Jade was so different than Jack and Jasmine, and went to a different school,(hence flying home from school), they didn't think of her as part of the closeness that Jack and Jasmine had.
Anyway, it is a hot story.
Thanks for the read.
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Anonymous09/20/13
MY GOD, GET AN EDITOR! It would be a good story, but was it is written, it makes hard reading. Almost at times needing an interpreter.
I can't quite picture how Jade was sitting in the shower and she felt something wet and warm on her pussy. It was her sister licking her. Was Jade sitting upside down doing a kind of head stand? Then Jasmine says that she could tell by how wet Jade was that she was aroused. THE SHOWER WAS RUNNING, of course she was wet.
In chapter one you have Jasmine's measurements 34 30 34 and now Jade's are an identical 34 24 34. What kind of diet was Jasmine on where she could lose 4 inches from her waist in just a few days or less, or was it non stop sex with her doing all the work and not stopping for food.
would have been better to mention a 3 sibling in the 1st ch. plus that makes them triplets not twins.
Fucking hot
So sucking fucking hot. Just love it when I am up to my balls and tonsils in hot cunt. More and more please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's, uk.
Thanks you for all your thoughts and comments.
Thanks again, everybody. I can't believe these stories are going over so well. Ch. 3-Part 1 will be written soon, I promise. Then two shortly after. Part 1 will be about Jack and his mother. Part 2 will be about Jasmine and Jade seducing their father. I think three will turn out well. Four will be my final installment in the series, but I will probably will revisit this world sometime in the future.
Anyway, thanks again for all your feedback and everything. See you in about a week.
P.S. For those you are wondering, Alex and Emma Ch. 2 will probably be here in about a month, I hope. Won't be much longer.
So are they triplets or twins plus one.
Since all three were born at the same time that would make them triplets, but perhaps Jade was so different than Jack and Jasmine, and went to a different school,(hence flying home from school), they didn't think of her as part of the closeness that Jack and Jasmine had.
Anyway, it is a hot story.
Thanks for the read.
MY GOD, GET AN EDITOR! It would be a good story, but was it is written, it makes hard reading. Almost at times needing an interpreter.
I can't quite picture how Jade was sitting in the shower and she felt something wet and warm on her pussy. It was her sister licking her. Was Jade sitting upside down doing a kind of head stand? Then Jasmine says that she could tell by how wet Jade was that she was aroused. THE SHOWER WAS RUNNING, of course she was wet.
In chapter one you have Jasmine's measurements 34 30 34 and now Jade's are an identical 34 24 34. What kind of diet was Jasmine on where she could lose 4 inches from her waist in just a few days or less, or was it non stop sex with her doing all the work and not stopping for food.
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