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7. The Patriots Ch. 13-15

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by mh491205/07/13

Love, this story

I love seeing a new chapter every day. This is a great story and I am anxious to see how things work out for Micah and Ellia.

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by Anonymous05/07/13

ellia

i wish she would see things more clearly with him. She doesn't have to give up her life. If they really loved one another they would help each other!

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by Anonymous05/08/13

A compelling combination of a slowly developing love story and an amazing view into the elite swimming and bicycling subcultures. Thank you very much for a most pleasurable read!

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