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7. The Patriots Ch. 22-24

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by GimletEdge05/11/13

Delightful chapter in Micah and Ellia's story

As always, the supporting characters also shine through. I especially enjoyed the greater glimpse of Oliver. Can't help but be intrigued by Adrian and Monique, too. I have my fingers crossed that there will be further novels ahead with the yet-to-be-paired family members. I'm so glad you put this back up on Literotica.

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by teedeedub05/11/13

Awesome

thanks....

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by Anonymous04/27/15

this is...

an awesome love story...and I seldom use that word - well done! Thanks for your time and talent!

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