This was really good! Well described; I could picture it perfectly. Please keep going! I can't wait to read more.
Very good for sis and bro to help each other. It can be fun and exciting
Is that all there is?
A good story, detailed and captivating. Just one thing : Can't wait for the next part !
Hey this one was really good - when is the next part coming? Been waiting for over a year :)
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Excellent Start
This was really good! Well described; I could picture it perfectly. Please keep going! I can't wait to read more.
Good start
Very good for sis and bro to help each other. It can be fun and exciting
Is that all there is?
Can't wait
A good story, detailed and captivating. Just one thing : Can't wait for the next part !
next part?
Hey this one was really good - when is the next part coming? Been waiting for over a year :)
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Back to An Affair In The Elevator Ch. 01 or
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