Doris or Sharon....??????
Both. Dour Doris from Dumpster town was an alliteration to show how Sharon's personality had changed.
This story was incomplete. There wasn't a flow to it
This was fun reading. Sexy reading, too. Yes, wish I knew, like the homeowner, what it was all about for her...but really enjoyed it.
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Doris or Sharon....??????
Both.
Dour Doris from Dumpster town was an alliteration to show how Sharon's personality had changed.
Confusing and not a lot of detail
This story was incomplete. There wasn't a flow to it
Startling and Fun
This was fun reading. Sexy reading, too. Yes, wish I knew, like the homeowner, what it was all about for her...but really enjoyed it.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Housekeeper's Woes or
More submissions by Ashson.