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Well, the circle is getting complete now, but I suspect there is more!
Another fantastic entry or should I say fantasy from our favorite erotic writer. Is this series just a figment of Williams imagination? Is he having a 'night terror'? How real is this very bold and exhibitionist neighbor who we are lead to believe is a 'porn star' in Williams fertile mind. What is Liz up to? seems to me she's becoming a major character here too. Probably disappointed the moving men didn't have more of a role in this series, but then maybe they are why Liz is moaning or Susan is putting the show on for. The obvious suspense leaves one with the desire for more chapters. Something tells me William will upgrade his voyeuristic equipment to the mentioned 'night vision' before he ever gets intimate with the blonde bombshell across the street. A great entry in the series, but as I've mentioned before to get the full appreciation of our author's talent, newbies should go back to chapter one and enjoy. Thanks SJP, you have made a long day enjoyable and ending with a smile! The Bird
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I have been hooked into this story since chapter 1. Still can't decide how you will take this plot. Worth the 5 stars.
I was a little slow finding this post.
I thought I was being more diligent than that. I see stuwatcher52 is also a devoted fan and is much more articulate in his deserved praise of your work, than is my limited ability ability to express, so much so that you will probably see me defer to his comments. He is articulate enough I think he may be a writer, but when I checked his profile found he hasn't as yet posted any stories, but while trying to express my appreciation for your writing I also wanted to express my appreciation to him for his ability to deliver your deserved praise and many of my thoughts in ways that exceed my abilities.
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