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A Dream Come True Ch. 03

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by Anonymous03/27/13

Longer

It's a good story so far. It's just short, would be better if it was somewhat longer.

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by AhzureDragon03/27/13

Loving it!

I agree it could really be longer but I love it anyway. Keep going its so different I'm hooked.

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by Anonymous02/09/15

Need more.

This is something that I like really well. It's different from the majority of the rest of the stories I have read so far. The chapters do need to be longer though otherwise it can make it to where people are disinterested in it. Other than that I say it is highly interesting and very well written. I hope you are going to continue with this for I will write it down and check on it once a month.

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