Yes, Dear Ch. 03

Great!

Very nice. But, you can add another couple of pages easy! Go for it. There is so much more to add to fill it out. Reach and you shall find more inside of you!

Well written....

Good story...

And it was a love story...

Well done!

Enjoyable Romance

The disaster, as usual, was an opportunity... Karen was so insensitive that she never realized that even if he had not found his partner he would never take her back.

great story

great story loved the ending and the realness of the whole story.

Thank you!

Thanks for finishing your story. As for those upset that it took too long? They should seriously consider demanding their money back.

Good story

A few typos, but I'll be damned if I saw them.

Great story!

Interesting story. Made me wonder what kind of feelings a transgender went thru during their life.

I almost...

I almost made the mistake of not reading this story (the 3 chapters). I can honestly say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading them. Thank you for sharing. Easily worth 5 stars.

At first I was kind of skeptical after reading the disclaimer..but then it was such a beautiful story.

Worked beautifully

The end was not a big surprise but it worked very well and the story was wonderful -

The TG crowd should be pleased if and when they find it -

It is a simple romance story - they can be so hard to tell well lol

VERY GOOD STORY

ALL IT TAKES IS LOVE AND HONESTY TO MAKE THINGS WORK. THATS MY THOUGHTS ANY WAY. I LIKED THE STORY AND YES IT WAS DIFFERENT AND THERE WERE PROBLEMS BUT THEY OVER CAME THEM AND HAVE A HAPPY LIFE.

RON

There are some things that should be told to a significant other...

BEFORE they become "significant".
I fault Andi for that one - she should have told him before it progressed to any sexual action...
Maybe physically being a guy while in all other ways being a gal shouldn't have the weight it does, but it does... it's like, there was a sexual secret and it should be shared before sexual actions...

Like "my job required moving (and you knew) but you never told me you would never move away from here."
Or "You know I wanted kids (of my loins) but you never told me you hate kids."
Or "You know my religion is X and my kids will be too but you never told me yours was Y and you won't accept that ever."

MAYBE with whatever the potential deal breaker is I'll decide it isn't after all... but I deserved to know it was there as soon as you did... I may have fell in love with you but you had no right to allow that to continue or especially escalate (if you love me too) while hiding something from me that effects US. Anything.

Oh, by the way, knowing I haven't said it yet but I enjoyed the story. I know that was just a weakness in her character not how she is in general so it was easy enough to like her in spite of it - kind of like the majority of his family.

Not an unexpected ending...

But I loved the journey getting to it.

A proper romantic story and yes, something of a fairy tale... But so fucking what!

The tenderness between the main characters was well described and heart-warming.

I disagree with those who say that she should have told Brian before they were emotionally attached. No two situations are te same and in this case, she timed it well.

Take a big 5*

A Quiete Week

was not much new this week on Lit. that caught my interest .
So i decided to revisit some of my favorite Authors .

Have to say in all honesty , that i skipped reading this story previously.
have to say that doing so was my loss ...

a very well written tale
delightfuly entertaining & engaging
remarkably interesting & intriguing

now off to look at other profiles & see what other quality storys on topics / genres i have in the past Avoided are out there.

One of your best.

I have read most of your stories but had skipped this, Boy was I wrong for not giving it a chance never judge a book by it's blurb.

You won me over

Once I got into the story and figured out what it was about, I was ready to quit reading. I don't generally like transgender stories, but you won me over. Half way through I was cheering for her! Henceforth, I will just read your stories and check my pre-conceptions at the door. Thank You, MIke

liked it again

Beautiful story. Heart warming and loving.
Ron. Texas
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true love

True love is where you find it and it makes no difference who it is with. I have never read a story of transgender before just thought it was not my thing but you proved me wrong with this story. I really enjoyed the story it was so loving and caring. The title is what pulled me in.yes it is in my favorites.
Ron. Texas

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New read

Being straight,never read a transgender story before,found it moving and enjoyable.

true love

True love has no boundaries maybe just a speed bump or two. They have there love and there children and family so what more could you ask for. In my favorites and not my first time to read it. Is there a follow up story in the process of being written or have you already written one if so what is it called and what section.

Ron. Texas
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nice story

But I do believe all homo/les are severely mentally ill. There is ZERO genetic test to prove their validity. Sure some can put a brave face on it, but not for long. They always prove my point EVERY time. NEVER really happy.........

What...

Nice Story Person/ You are the one that needs help you should read the story with an open mind and I notice you did not give your name so that tells me a lot about you it's kinda like some of the PERVTS we have in the South that run around with sheets and hoods on so you will not know who they are and how sick they are.

Ron. Texas

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Great Story

Very moving lot of emotion in the story line. Never say Never .Love is where you'find
It and who you find it with so open your mind and heart.

Ron. Texas
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Nice Story Has a case of the Ignorance

You believe this and that and the other and have nothing to support your nonsense.
judgemental as all get out; i'm glad i don't know you. sad,sad life, hater!

I didn't think. . . . !!!

I didn't think I'd like this story but as I progressed through it,it grew on me. My wife and I have friends of both sexes who are gay and several family members who had a difficult time figuring out what sex they were going to embrace. Good story,food for thought !!!

well done

thanks for the straight (pun intended) forward presentation of a romantic love story. all the doubts, questions, uncertainties, and possible pitfalls were clearly and honestly presented. you told a tale of two people and their extended families who fell in love and found a way to make it work.

Excellent

What a delightful love story

Abrupt ending

I didn't like the last paragraphs all that much, as an epilogue it sucked, having the last few lines be about her worrying about a 16 year old trying to take her man doesn't exactly set the right tone.
The page cutoff is a bit wonky also, I expected there to be more on the last page, but was left with only an Author's Note.
I would suggest fleshing out that ending a bit, adding at least a few hundred words.

Abrupt

I have to admit it ended on a questing note but it was/is a very good story. At first I was not sold on the story . I mean a construction worker and a transgender woman but you have to read all three chapters and you Must remember Love is where you find it and who you find it with. The heart and the mind do not always agree. Her boss accepted her his family accepted her so what is the problem I do not see one all I ask is open your mind and heart when reading the story.
Ron
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In all seriosity, I have to say that this is one of the finest stories I have ever read on this site.

I gave you Five Stars all the way. Thank you for a really fine tale.

An excellent writer telling an excellent story...sums up my feelings about all of your work that I have read to date. Thank you very Much!

Thoroughly stunning

the method of telling this story was exquisite, have not enjoyed a story so much for ages, very well written and paced, thank you

This story surprised me.

I did not expect to like or finish it, but your style grabbed my interest and I thoroughly enjoyed the whole tale. It gave insight into the mind of transsexual or transgender people. Fiction does that for me, more so than technical papers

Thank you for a riveting story.