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Always the Seamstress Ch. 01

byLilyDecember©
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by Anonymous

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by MizzButterflye03/27/13

Please continue this story. I think it's off to a great start!

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by fanticy03/27/13

great start

really like it so far . hope you continue the story :)

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by Anonymous03/27/13

Ditto

More, and longer!

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by Anonymous03/27/13

More please!

I really liked how things are beginning, looking forward to reading the rest of it.

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by Poisonlove03/27/13

pretty good

up to next chapter

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by psych081703/27/13

But...

This was a pretty good story, so I'll wait for the next chapter. But, the second paragraph was a little confusing. Just work on your clarity, other than that good work

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by twistedfairy03/27/13

Great start.

Was rather short, but quite wonderful despite this. Certainly caught my interest. Look forward to reading more from you.

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by Anonymous03/27/13

more please

Please write more its a wonderfull story so far

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by Rheamistress03/27/13

For some reason, I can't get the stars to click.. 5 stars, darlin'... I am looking forward to the next chapter.. :)

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by fefe42803/27/13

Broke my rule....

I usually won't read new authors that start with a first chapter....too many disappoint and don't bother finishing their stories. Nothing frustrates me more than getting into a story only to have it abandoned by its author, but if you promise to keep this one up, I promise I'll read all of it. You're off to a great start!!!

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by KiwiKing03/27/13

5 Stars...

This was a great start to what I can already feel, will be an awesome story. Please write quickly. Looking forward to much, much more!


Nicci

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by Anonymous03/27/13

If it makes you write more, this is my comment,
write more please. 5* for further encouragement

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by MsTaylor03/27/13

Great start!!

Can't wait to read more, she seems like a fire cracker!!

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by peachesgirl03/27/13

More please

I like your first chapter. I think you set the tone but left us yearning for that little bit more. I hope you post another chapter soon.

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by Irish_Indian03/27/13

Great start! Hope you add more soon, I'd very much like to see where this goes! :)

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by Anonymous03/27/13

May we have more, please!

Loved the start here. I really hope you continue on

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by roselove03/28/13

more. MORE. lol

This is a great beginning. Hopeful ill see ur next instalment up. XD fingers crossed.

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by browneyes21303/28/13

MORE PLEASE :)

sounds sooooo good! interested in this story!

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by AbbieStarr03/28/13

Great Start

Can't wait to read more :)

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by Anonymous03/28/13

Definitely more and soon please!! Love what u have written so far ... But its just a teaser to what could be a great story :)

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by Zodia19503/28/13

Oh definitely want more. Be nice if you could describe Ruari though. I love how it's set in Ireland too hehe.

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by Anonymous03/28/13

More more more!

Oh please your just teasing with that begining hope to see alot more from you, your an excellent writer, but you must get a bit more detail in. It would be awesome to know a touch about your characters and i hope you do include it in the next installment if you write one.

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by fallenangel603/28/13

more please

i think this could be good i agree with others some details about them all as you develop the story

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by Anonymous03/28/13

Fantastic

It's a promising start please continue.

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by AhzureDragon03/28/13

Teaser

That was barely more than a teaser and do hope you already have more writing as it would be nice to read a much longer section. Great Start.

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by Anonymous03/28/13

hurry hurry

please hurry, you have set the bait and i am hooked and wanting more

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by Decadentdessert03/28/13

Thanks for the teaser. Come on now, you know you got the goods and you have bated us well. Please CONTINUE!!!!!!

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by Anonymous03/28/13

I am number 28.

I think that answers the question as to whether or not people want more. Pretty please write more before the crowd gets restless and gathers upon your doorstep with torches (the nonbattery kind) blazing. But hay, no pressure!

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by EuphoriaSlam6903/28/13

Uh oh! Now you've done it!

You've created a rabid crowd for your writing!!! :) Better keep the wild things entertained at regular intervals! Great start! More please! Quickly now!

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by Anonymous03/28/13

yes obviously

write more this is worthy of my vote saying 5 of 5 plz need more lolz

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by GreenEyedKitten03/28/13

Please

Loved it!!!! Please more!

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by Anonymous03/28/13

: )

very nice more please

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by philibra03/28/13

more

shows a lot of promise

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by Anonymous03/28/13

More!!!

I would like to see you expand on this story, has lots of promise!

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by Anonymous03/31/13

A cute little story.

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by Anonymous04/02/13

MORE!!!

I really liked this story. Though it was short it was cute, and very well written. I hope you decide to expand on it, I think you could go a long way with this story. Good luck!

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by Littlecat7605/05/13

Good start

Definitely like to see more!

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by Anonymous02/28/14

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!

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