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name change
in the middle of the story. She went from being Kelly to being Tracy?
Damn
You proof read, but sometimes you read what you think you wrote.
ohhh
Darling I know you are upset but its okay, I just image my name instead. All the time.
Who the hell ...
... is Tracy besides an ill-begotten abberation from some earlier version?
This is awfully close to rape - a year hence we can expect to see Paul in front of a judge after one of these games goes a cropper when the girl complains or shoots
editing oops
Well, maybe Kelly/Tracy has multiple personality disorder and Paul doesn't know what craziness HE is getting into....lol.....doesn't damage the core of the story.
Waiting...
I think her going over how it would pan out is normal. The protest is amusing who wouldn't want to say no but knows deep down they crave it. Its a playful thing to do when you truly want what he said he was going to do.... ;-)
Nice writing, but missing something
It seems as though all your non-consent stories are rather mild. There is very little forced sex, but somehow it falls into this genre? The overall feel of these stories are more "erotic couplings" than non-con it seems. Maybe I'm just too demented and kinky to appreciate it. Wouldn't be the first time. Perhaps try something a bit more intense and truly forced, not ending in cuddle time.
I kinda liked this s lot, but......
.....if I had known a bit more at the front about why this was coming down
and how they knew each other I think I might have found it even more exciting
and enjoyable. .
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