All Comments on 'Al's Sex Slave Lot'

I'm a Louisa... I'm a bit crazy... Fucked up life did that to me but I'll fuck your brains out... You'll never be wanting for anything!

Great story! I can't wait to see what other stories you have up your sleeve!

I would love to see this story much better fleshed out. It's a great synopsis but goes by way too quickly, IMO.

I am a huge fan of this kind of story. It got off on a very good start but then just sorta petered out, and not in a good way. I would truly love the opportunity to read this story again if it was fleshed out some more. Particularly if it was a woman doing the sales pitch to a man. Describing all of their features and skills in detail, comparing and contrasting them to him and enticing him to make a selection... Write that and I'll give you five stars and be wishing I could give you six.