All Comments on 'A Coincidence of Wants Ch. 01'

looking forward to this one's continuation...

Nice character development and what seems to be a good storyline start.

I hope to see more of this story soon.

Thanks for the read.

I enjoyed this piece. It was a not too much, and not too little story. Just enough to make me look forward to reading more.

Lovely start. Please keep developing this story. 5 stars, you deserve it.

they needed to fuck

Great start hard as a rock

You messed it up when you wrote it like a son writing a letter to his mom

Everyone has an opinion, or fav way that something is written. I don't think the author 'messed up' writing that way at all. I actually liked it a lot! Besides, it could only be considered messed up if you had specifically asked it to be written a certain way and the writer did something completely different! Hehe.

Mmm, that ni Ill look for the next chapter! ;)

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex, reminds me of my mother and myself except we teased for three years.

A very good start, a well composed story.

Character development is off to a good start. I like reading about the character's thoughts and emotional and mental development.

I absolutely love your preamble and subscribe and agree with every single word. I find reading mother/son stories to be uber interesting as well as erotic, and this one promises to be a very good one. Thanks for your talent.