All Comments on 'Choice'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Neat

Nicely written. I like the touches of humour. Once the plan had been explained, it became slightly predictable. More surprises would spice it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Nicely written. I didn't like the actual rape, but it was certainly descriptive

pentheswordpentheswordabout 11 years ago

Nicely written story.

peebudypeebudyabout 11 years ago
nice story

not sure why people read NC stories and the post comments about rape.

anyhow, I liked the creative punishment and the very descriptive action. well done.

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

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