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by Anonymous03/29/13

Neat

Nicely written. I like the touches of humour. Once the plan had been explained, it became slightly predictable. More surprises would spice it up.

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by Anonymous03/29/13

Nicely written. I didn't like the actual rape, but it was certainly descriptive

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by penthesword03/29/13

Nicely written story.

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by peebudy03/30/13

nice story

not sure why people read NC stories and the post comments about rape.

anyhow, I liked the creative punishment and the very descriptive action. well done.

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by chytown04/02/13

Thanks***

For the read.

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