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by Anonymous

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by Angeline03/26/13

Very well written

and strongly narrative. You're a good story teller!

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by itsacrazyworld03/26/13

loved it

Vivid and descriptive.

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by greenmountaineer03/27/13

I agree with Angeline, but I also wonder if a little less description and (just) a little more ambiguity in the narrative might actually have made the point better.

It still was a good read BTW.

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