All Comments on 'Mistress Briane makes a demand'

yup, me to a tee

but what do I know?

men thought they knew it all

where that?

and rest could use a little more proofing, editing and rethinking

BWTF fived

punctuation on the first line

Mistress Briane came to see:

either/or

since you have it elsewhere, clear up the confusion

we have a dirth of subs here eager to talk about their balls or absence of, although they are still muttering about something or other....

try subbing this for line 4 verse 7 "allow her to hold the reigns" or this"drive them all insane" or " castrate their balls again" that line needs a little something

who could=to

"or the chance for a Briane ride" there is the sexy part, suggested, tempting, control through sex, maybe a little more tit-ilation is needed but nicely done