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Mistress Briane makes a demand

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by twelveoone03/26/13

and bragged about their balls

yup, me to a tee
but what do I know?
men thought they knew it all
where that?
and rest could use a little more proofing, editing and rethinking
BWTF fived

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by twelveoone03/26/13

or

punctuation on the first line
Mistress Briane came to see:
either/or
since you have it elsewhere, clear up the confusion

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by erectus12303/26/13

nice to have another dom on the site, sharpen your claws

we have a dirth of subs here eager to talk about their balls or absence of, although they are still muttering about something or other....

try subbing this for line 4 verse 7 "allow her to hold the reigns" or this"drive them all insane" or " castrate their balls again" that line needs a little something
who could=to
"or the chance for a Briane ride" there is the sexy part, suggested, tempting, control through sex, maybe a little more tit-ilation is needed but nicely done

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