by demure101
Passions . Very nice .
Even those who think sonnets are passé might appreciate this. The fluency of the words impressed me the most.
"and not before time either" to be honest has me a bit stymied. I can make some associations with it, but I wonder if a more concrete word phrase might have been better.
Nonetheless, it very much felt like a "song" sung very well.
...she clearly doesn't want to try. How very sad...and what a great rendering of those terrible emotions! You're such a natural!